@kenpokis: No, don't do that unless they say requests are okay. Thanks.
@sasuke89:
The outlines are much better but the man one still looks pear-shaped o_o
The shading on that latest one is really severe. Instead of that super dark outline go for something less contrasted (or is that just the original black outline? Hm, I think it is. Well anyway it needs to be altered).
Additionally the face is awful (looks like a male alien) and the knee-joints are on the inner thighs.
Scootch the eyes inward toward the nose, lose some of the details on the cheeks and brow, soften the neck features, make the nose either go away or have less definition (and it should bell inward in the center, not come to a point), and move those knee-joints to the centers of the legs instead of facing each other.
The more definition on a face, the more masculine or old the character becomes. Young females (pre-40's) are seldom drawn with much definition on their face, because it looks like wrinkles or chisled features. Dudes are usually drawn with slightly harder definitions when they're "manlier". More dark lines are used when portraying old age. So lighten up on the chick :')
Lastly there is no defined light source, don't just copy and paste one vertical half onto the other. The shading has to move with it: particularly on the thighs, calves, and breasts.
Oh, I forgot to mention: knees start lower than that--thighs are longer than the calves.
@sasuke89:
The outlines are much better but the man one still looks pear-shaped o_o
The shading on that latest one is really severe. Instead of that super dark outline go for something less contrasted (or is that just the original black outline? Hm, I think it is. Well anyway it needs to be altered).
Additionally the face is awful (looks like a male alien) and the knee-joints are on the inner thighs.
Scootch the eyes inward toward the nose, lose some of the details on the cheeks and brow, soften the neck features, make the nose either go away or have less definition (and it should bell inward in the center, not come to a point), and move those knee-joints to the centers of the legs instead of facing each other.
The more definition on a face, the more masculine or old the character becomes. Young females (pre-40's) are seldom drawn with much definition on their face, because it looks like wrinkles or chisled features. Dudes are usually drawn with slightly harder definitions when they're "manlier". More dark lines are used when portraying old age. So lighten up on the chick :')
Lastly there is no defined light source, don't just copy and paste one vertical half onto the other. The shading has to move with it: particularly on the thighs, calves, and breasts.
Oh, I forgot to mention: knees start lower than that--thighs are longer than the calves.