Concept Template

[brainstorm]

I made this for fun to get rid of the frustration of a script I'm doing. I've gotten some feedback from the IRC and wanted to share it. This template was not built for movement in an RPG, like a character set. It was meant for concept art and decoration (Like a full body face graphic or something you'd but next to a character description.)

I most likely will not color this in, If I do, it'll probably been on a rainy day... But here you go::


http://img104.imageshack.us/img104/3953 ... atesa6.png[/IMG]

Characters from left to right: (Top Row) Yuffie ??? (Final Fantasy 7), Tifa Lockeheart (Final Fantasy 7), Kilala Negra (Kiss of the Serpent), Cruxis Azrah (Kiss of the Serpent), Ayman ??? (Kiss of the Serpent)

 

[Despain]

You've gotten feedback from irc but haven't implemented it. Leg position and the details on the back are still major problems.

 

[brainstorm]

I did use your tips, but like you said in the IRC, I didn't use them well enough. Could you tell be exactly what I can do to fix them, In detail?

 

[Mascarpone]

The pigeon Toed girl thing is a real problem. It may look cute to you but it's a very awkward position to hold, particularly for adults (thus why u usually see it more on toddlers who are lival to fall over while walking anyways.) if you insist on having the inward turned toes for the cute factor save it for a specific pose of "oh look how cute i'm trying to be" rather than a relaxed position

Similarly on the guy his toes turn out a little too much. Center them a bit.

For both of them, change the perspective on the feet a little to look down a little more, so it'll look more natural with the rest of the body's perspective.

 

[RavenTDA]

Yeah you might want to do the girls feet like the males more from the knee down at least. Or maybe shape them more like the childs. The line work looks really good so far. This template has a lot of potential. Is this for free use? If it is I hope you'll provide a sorata rtp or at least a large amount of examples. Also you could use a chubby version and maybe a muscular version as well in the future.

 

[brainstorm]

Thanks, I'll keep it in mind. I'll try fixing them tonight unless I have to do something else...

And yeah, Raven, I was thinking of letting the members request a certain pose or muscle type, as long as it didn't get overwhelming. The line art is pretty easy.

EDIT:: Any Better?

http://img48.imageshack.us/img48/9426/c ... te2cu5.png[/img]

 

[kenpokis]

Looks pretty good except for the pose like everyone has said. :drip01: If only I could find someone to make me a template.

 

[RavenTDA]

Her feet. The toes shouldn't point to eachother... her calves could use some changing around too. They shouldn't be on just one side or else it looks like it's pointing to one direction.

 

[Jeronimus]

Also, Yuffie Kisaragi is from Final Fantasy VII.

I have nothing else that's even slightly useful to say, I'm afraid.

 

[BunnyKinx]

no offence but it looks like they all need to use the toilet... with there knees in like that...

 

[Dokien]

no offence but it looks like they all need to use the toilet... with there knees in like that...

I agree. Sasuke89 - seperate the legs 1-2px apart and the angle of the feet by 5-10?.

 

[Samboy]

...it looks like they all need to use the toilet...

Sasuke likes it like that. XD

I actually really like this template, it's looking quite good. Just fix the pidgeon-toeing, and we'll all be much happier.

 

[brainstorm]

http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/672/ ... te3uv6.png[/img]

Alright this is my 3rd try.
I spread the legs on the female, added detail to the butt of the Female and Child. Raised the Child's Torso a bit, Changed the feet on the Male and Female and deleted detail on the stmach on Shoulder Blades.


EDIT::: And yes samboy... I do like it like that lol...

 

[Jason]

Can you atleast colour some of them in ? Lol XD

 

[Dawne]

It's improved alot, but the man's torso is way too pair shaped, and he has no knees.

 

[brainstorm]

http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/9461/c ... te3id2.png[/img]

 

[BunnyKinx]

hey looking alot better well done. but the test of time is will people use this. (its good enougth)

but also. will you finish it?

but again

WELL DONE :D

 

[brainstorm]

Your so negative lol. Thanks for the help... And yeah, I don't people'll use it because it's only one frame but It's their choice. It might be good for DBS battlers too if your into that kind of style.

Unless someone says like: "I sucks start the whole thing over", I think I'm done with the lineart... I'll start color (Maybe) when I get the chance. I might do a few RTP charas or allow people to request a few characters. If do allow requests though, I'll post it in the first post...

EDIT::

http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/5884 ... te4nc1.png[/IMG]
Looks weird to me.

 

[kenpokis]

Hmm ahem do you take requests? I am really needing a template for my project. Thanks

 

[brainstorm]

um no... read my post.