Cloud Strife~> A Must See

[kidd6686]

First Off...
This is made from a template i made, from a character made from freakofnature's "Ashes" from rmxpu.net . . Tongue twister i know. .

Below Cloud Strife ~> Need alot of feedback on this.
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i297/ ... loud01.png[/IMG]

I will be releasing the template. . but I wish to speak to Freakofnature first so I can correct credit. Going to be awhile I think cause he is on temp leave from rmxpu.net forums v. vhttp://www.rmxp.org/forums/images/smil ... /blink.gif
O_o

 

[Tana]

This FreakofNature?

It looks prety good, however you've used a bit of [rw]Pillow Shading[/rw] and the top of his gloves and boots should be curved, not straight lines.

 

[kidd6686]

Yes that be him ^^ pillow shading information was typed in wrong i think lol i read it and was confused cause it said one on the right is pillow when it was the one on the left. . lol. . but anyways i understand what you mean ^^; not alot i can do since really have no light source atm for this sprite i could use a imaginary one but then it will have to be change for later use no?

 

[Tana]

Well, usually in games, we just assume lighting is coming from the top. (and a little to the left)

Thnx for the correction on the wiki, I typed it quickly.

 

[freakofnature]

Hey, wanted to ask me something?

 

[crazymew]

to be honest, that has got to be the best and most promising cloud ive seen yet! (using a big template ofcourse)

 

[kidd6686]

@freakofnature
I just wanted to let you know this was made from a sprite you made of "Arshes" from rmxpu.net. . and well most credit to you I even made a template its 60% done was going to see how I do with using one of the largest sprites seen for rmxp but I wanted to ask if its ok with you because its just as much mine as yours by far~! theres a male and female WIP templates. . ^^ just let me know~!

@crazymew
wow thanks I love the face the most of it really screams cloud~! its a WIP for now im trying to accually get sticking to one project of mine im trying to get a new RTP started. . Im not good at Tilesets yet but working on asking people to give me links and tips on doing them. Thank you for the great comment!

@Tana
what more can i say except thank you as well you will see a better result from your comment ^^ no more pillow shading for me ~!

 

[freakofnature]

No problem at all man, and the character is looking very nice so far, good luck with your template too

 

[crazymew]

yeah, it really does look great, heh, clouds hair actually looks like his hair... i havent seen anyone around here who could pull that off yet (give or take the extremely talented among these boards, showkaizer, tane, etc), keep up the good work!

 

[sweet_thing2090]

nice, definately looks like him, maybe a tiny bit more dark/light contrast on the hair?

 

[kidd6686]

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i297/ ... ewedit.png[/IMG]

Left or Right i work mroe on shading and light and dark contrast of the image now is it a improvement?

 

[Sleepy_Dragon]

The right one looks alot better. The added contrast makes it seem more tangible and is just more visually pleasing.

 

[crazymew]

his hair should be more yellow shouldnt it?

http://www.squareuniverse.net/downloads/wallpaper_winampskins/kh/kh-art007.jpeg