character sketchins

[moxie]

(yeah e; is just how i show that i've edited a post)

anyway i just noticed your guy's face--it's off in several key ways that i need to illustrate and can't do here but i will try to remember later to show what i mean.

i'd appreciate it. his eyes in particular really look wonky to me but i'll be damned if i know how to fix it.

oh shit, i didn't even realize how tiny her hand was until you pointed it out. haha. it's amazing how many glaringly obvious things can escape your notice when you stare at something for too long.

Spoiler: eye searingly bad sketchy sketches possibly nws for barbie boobage

party lineup

monsterrrss

now with less copyins

ohmagawd now that i look at it after the fact, the first mask chick is a total ripoff of mawk's except chinese dragony instead of a lion, sorry mawk i liked the design so much i apparently copied it inadvertently

 

[Venetia]

oy too tired right now
but the human-centipede hybrid reminds me of a mix between scarlet and asphyxia from silent hill homecoming:

Spoiler: scarlet (a giant doll/mannequin who stands erect and also goes spider-like while you chip off her face)

Spoiler: (asphyxia--er yeah she's a special girl... actually i think she was the easiest thing in the game but design is coo)

the game wasn't fantastic but the monster designs in those games are always great just great

 

[Venetia]

ok i'm wayyyyyyyy too tired here but i attempted a musculature overlay.

also i might have taken an ambien at some point >_> so this may look odd.

But basically the redlines are kind of blocked out musculature, and the blue lines are the potential detail shapes.
You don't have to follow it or anything, i just wanted to show you where some small shape changes can make the guy look normal (after you rework it with your own line economy) :P
hope it helps.

 

[moxie]

That's really awesome! Thank you, I appreciate it. I have to admit I never put anywhere near that amount of detail into the basework - I just draw shapes and start winging it. Old habits die hard and all that. :x

 

[moxie]

d-d-double post

aight i've re-worked them quite a bit (note to self don't ever color something until you're 100% sure about the lineart that was a huge fucking pain) do they look any better?

 

[Jason]

i see people wearing ties all the time just for the hell of it. i guess it's fashionable now or something? but yeah, lengthen it.

... I do this.

E: The man looks fine, but the womans face scares me... looks off, mainly the mouth

 

[Daxis]

i think that extra line around the woma's eyes and that loose strand of hair and the slightly boniness in the way the outline of the face is drawn makes the woman a bit scary, yeah.Might be the mouth. The loose strand of hair looks slightly like her bone structure.