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Character set WIP (PA)

Hey guys, You all know me as the guy who never finsihes his WIP's. Well this time, it's different :tongue2:

as this guy will come in usefull to me, and the fact thats it's only an RTP sprite.

So heres the sprite and it's reference-
Velnwip.png

-Edit- finished the first row, recoloured the pants and added shadows to his forehead.
Velnwip-1.png
http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa230/Loofahmizer/finishedsprite.png[/img]

C&C's are appreciated :thumb:
 
Wow...great job on the character. I really love the hair design, did you do it yourself? I think the pantas are a bit too baggy....but that's just me :lol:
 
Thanks Drgaon I didn't think that I'd get such positive feedback from the sprite. And the pants used to be 2 pixels bigger, so I'll see which looks better.
 
I think the colours are bad, you should lighten the hair by adding more highlight, and with the pants, maybe use the same colours you did for your reference sprite. Oh and the shoes look a pit pointy (horizontally)
 
I suggest adding some shade on the skin below the hair. Right now it seems like it's not a part of him. The shirt could use some darker shades aswell. Looking at it without zooming in shows only two different shades, which isn't enough. Try to aim for at least 4, 5 if you have to.

Overall, it's looking nice though.
 

Emtch

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Loofah":1vpes670 said:
Dude, I've never even heard of that hero generator before. The character is original. :mad:
No need to get angry for something like this. If you say it's original, it propably is.
 

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