Character concept art

[CeruSkye]

Heys guys.

Been working on some concept art for a game of mine in early development. Anyhow, here is my first finished piece. I pretty much suck at lineart, and hands, and proportion, but whatever. C and C appreciated.

Thanks. ^_^

Keep in mind that this is severally downsized.

Character: Niamhe

Spoiler

http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/6946/niamheportrait001te6.jpg[/img]

 

[Diaforetikos]

Hey, your good. Haha. Anyways, as far as the C & C goes, her head seems too big. She feels stiff. Your really good at hair though. I don't see much else that needs to be improved. Keep it up man.

 

[trebor777]

The head is sightly too big, the neck is too long, except that it's pretty good, nice colors with good contrast.
Proportions are good^^. (well except for the head sightly bigger).
well your hands looks ok, even if you say you're crap. But avoid identical members, here both hands are in the same position. Not good for composition.

 

[Xcelled]

I disagree with the neck being to long, women have longer necks, also the head size is more part of style, still fits the body proportionately.(6 head bod) Nice cell-shading, the only thing I'd say is that the sleeves could use some polishing, The hair is awesome btw.

 

[XVinh]

Yes. I think the head is alright. It fits the body. The only problem I see here is the legs being too big. Or maybe it's just her pant that is big?

 

[Cruelty]

looks sharp. the shading/coloring is badass. the face kinda reminds me of something from the boondocks.

you got some skill man.

 

[xinrua]

I love it!

Allthough I hate her chin and neck, the chin seems to make the head look huge!!
The neck is just to wide.

verry good job!