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Chains of Life: ~The Mirror of Legends~ : (A Tactical Battle Game)

Mars

Member

Allow me to introduce myself: I am Mars. I am obsessed with Anime, Final Fantasy and of course, RPG XP. I support Good Grammar, and hate 1337 Speak. GOD DAMNIT I HATE 1337 SPEAK!!! I am an American, but I speak a little Japanese(Don't test me on that one please xD). I am obbsessed with Pocky. I am a proud owner of a Nintendo Wii, and want Sony to go die. xD .

Anyway... On to my Game- Chains of Life: ~The Mirror of Legends~ :

And No this is not My First game. Just The First Game I plan to finish....lol... ._.;

Let's Start with the Story...

STORY:
Welcome to the small Forest Village We call our home, Humvale.
My Grandfather Founded this Village on a long pioneering Journey...
Or So He says...

My Name is Vashe Ardanne (Or \n[1] for some of you game maker types xD)
I am of age 14 living in the Village of Humvale... As a little kid, my grandfather, the founder of Humvale, always told me mystical stories about what he saw on the way to this open clearing in the forest...

My favorite of these stories was the one about the Chains that could cause immortality, if chain-links were added to them, and my other favorite was of a mirror that could change time itself...

All my life, I had been under the influence that it was a myth... Until I found his old journal...

Vashe finds a chain-link on the ground in the forest, with Blairia(\n[2] the White Mage) on a search for the key to his grandfathers journal.

He finds the key deep within the cave, but when even deeper finds millions of chains with names. He puts the Chain-Link on his and grows a year younger,
then removes it and grows back to fourteen. He opens the journal with Blairia and reads it to find many pictures of what his grandfather had seen.

They go back to Grandpa, and he has a sudden rememberance of his trip...
He remembered his Rival was one of the people who came to Humvale, But where had he gone?
After some thought(and at least 5 sidequests) he remembers...

He wanted to use the chains for Immortality and Qonquer the world. =/
So they kicked him out of they're group and locked him up on a near-by Island they had seen before coming on land. Little did they know, he had all he needed. He had stollen his chain. They never found it, and the people who were taking him out to lock him up were never found.

They decided to forget about it... where would he go? What could he possibly do? What could they do to stop him??? Nothing...
^ ^
So his grandfather married, and had one son. who Married and had Vashe. (^_^)
/ II \
The First Aidists family had Blairia's Mother, and then Blairia, so Vashe and Blairia were always Very Close friends. (Question Answered)

Vashe and Blairia are married now,
and an evil dark lord slowly came to power, crushing millions of rebels under his iron fist. (Man I've always wanted to say that! xD)

Blairia and Vashe Plan to find the mirror and use it to stop the ruler from ever coming to rise, but little do they know, he has a trick up his sleeve!

Although he has no idea what-so-ever of Vashe and Blairia's plan,(Another Question Answered) he is Vashe's Grandfather's Rival as a child who took his chain, is immortal, And he wants the mirror too!!!

So that's the Story in a Nutshell... I will not revealing the middle or the ending. But as a clue, I'll say the end is actually sort of sad. Anyone who is smart could prolly figure it out.

Ao anyway...

CHARACTERS: (So Far)
Yes! There are more characters than our Dynamic Duo, Blairia and Vashe.

But I'm showing their Bios Since They are the only Fully Introduced Characters currently.

Vashe Ardanne:
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i196/ ... heFace.jpg[/IMG]
Ages 14-17
A strong, young man who is a very skilled fighter and loves adventure almost as much as Blairia.

Blairia Markze:
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i196/ ... iaFace.jpg[/IMG]
Ages 14-17
A very talented and sexy young First Aidist (as much as I want to use White Mage) who's sort of a Tomboy but is more of a loner. Her mother owns an Herbs and Potions shop and teaches her First Aid skills. She has an eye on Vashe.

All the Characters for now- I haven't took the time to make more xD

Umm.... Features?

FEATURES:
There will be many features, mostly scripts. From An Advanced Time System to Blackjack!(But more because that's that's only A to B. =/)


Scripts I am Needing. DESPERATELY:
A Piano Playing scritp where you use "A, S, D, F, J, K, L, and the infamous ;" as keys on a piano.

A Job Level Script Compatible with Zeniths Tactical Battle system, with which you level up The Job, and The Employee as a seperate level, and to change to certain jobs you need Certain levels in Two or more Classes. (Example:
Level 10 Fledgling = All the Basic Classes:
Level 5 First Aidist and Level 5 Knight = Palidin)

Umm... All I can think of.

TEAM.
Umm yeah.. don't think so.
I think RPGXP Is a one person thing, because I don't want changes in the style of anything- Mapping, Events.. all that Jazz.. (Speaking of Which, I play Jazz.)

Special Thanks To and For:

SCRIPTS:
Near Fantastica- Advanced Time System
Zenith- Tactical Battle System
Trickster- Blackjack!(The_JSTREET For the very idea itself! ^_^)
EiB- For the graphics

MUSIC:
Enterbrain
Astral Craft (satoc)

GRAPHICS:
Enterbrain
Paint/Photoshop xD

All for now...
I'll post screenies in a couple of seconds, I have to help mah little bro in Warioware Smooth Moves. xD Oh! And sorry for this being LOOOONNNNGGGG..
 

Mars

Member

lol I know Double Post.
But I need to put in these Screenshots.
Blsckjack:
Dont Forget Blackjack!
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i196/ ... ckjack.jpg[/IMG]
Questions?... Comments??

Anyone??? T_T
 
I like the mystery you put in the story, but it could use a bit more details. For example, I'd like to know Blairia's relationship to Vashe. Did they randomly run into each other? Are they childhood friends?

You could also work a bit more on your grammar. "God... You're Just..." has a few unnecessary capitals. The funny bits also may work inside the games, though they don't look very impressive if you just post them as standalone screenshots. ;)
 
Trickster made the blackjack script, so credit him for the script, credit EiB for the graphics, and credit me for the idea itself. All of that information is in the Blackjack topic.

Just a few other things. Your piano script request, that won't happen unless you provide the notes that need to be play and what keys they correspond with. If you do tackle that much, then it would be quite easy to do that system in events.

Same thing with the job system, another easy event job if you know how to use RMXP.

Your story has a few interesting plot pieces, but some of it is just random and illogical. Like the whole key thing. Did his Grandfather just decide to throw the key in a cave one day and leave it dare.

The whole love thing..."Hey we're forteen and haven't hit puberty yet, so in 3 years we're going to get married, and the fact that we randomly met each other in a cave makes our relationship stronger!" No that doesn't work.

Not only does the "dark lord" come out of no where, but some how he's all knowing. He already knows that the kids are going to try to stop them and devises a plot to stop them from stopping him. He also already knows about the mirror.

You really need to work out the kinks in the story, but you have ambition and hopefully that will take this game where it needs to be.
 

Anonymous

Guest

you can play blackjack ^_^ thats fun
i like game whit mini-game
i want play your game
bye:thumb:
 

Mars

Member

sorry... (xD) Lots of random stuff in the story... (Don't deck me for saying that! ._.; )

psgels: Thanks for all of your Criticism!!!^^ Sorry for my capitalizational grammar- I always have a sort of.... Dyslexic(?) problem I guess I could say. xD And the story. Yes. It's Verrrryyyy badly setup as it is now. Needs a lot of work. That's what I'm doing. ^.^

The_JSTREET:Thanks for all the Criticism!!^^ It's a work in progress, And thanks for telling me who made the Blackjack stuff!!! *Edited ^_^
And the whole Piano thing, I Don't know how to make programming buttons works. ._.; I'll figure it out. xD

Zenco: Thanks? ^^

(I am not used to getting constructive critisism, as the only projects I have ever done on forums are sprites for Ragnarok, and noone else was good at it, so they all thought I was some sort of prodegy. I was, of course, pretty good.~.^)
 

Mars

Member

lol... I think I should be more active?

No one is posting. x.x

Project Updates...
umm....
purple.

Been Sick- out of Town...
Haven't worked on it much..
 

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