[CH] For Shino RPG

[Hirokugawa]

Well, when I say shino, I mean the character from the Naruto series. he's my fav so I decided to make a game all about him.
I got a base sprite to go off of then made him from there. I've finished all but the back view. Let me know what you think.

 

[Hirokugawa]

Oh, btw, if you point out how it's very bright between his glasses and on his forehead with the front view, I already fixed that. Noticed it just as I posted it up

 

[Dopples]

Well...I'd say that the hair is off a little, mainly cause the head's base is bigger then it. I'd also say that the glasses need to be a bit higher. Other then that, it's actually ok.

 

[Hirokugawa]

just thought it'd be good to show everyone how he actually looks

And I'm not sure what you mean by the hair
And the glasses are low because generally his mouth is covered and I had to fit in a bit of his eyebrows otherwise it just looked funny

 

[Hirokugawa]

Oh and one other note, It's my first sprite ever, haven't done one before today

 

[krosS66]

I think it's great but when he is of coasts the clothes and the hair are darkest!

Hope you understand me!

 

[LegACy]

okay...
one, you need to desaturate his cloth, then you need to add more contrast to the hair..

 

[Hirokugawa]

Well, I took the clothing colour directly from a screenshot of him lol
But the hair yeah could use a little work

 

[LegACy]

Well, I took the clothing colour directly from a screenshot of him lol

that's the biggest problem... never took a color from an anime directly. Just take one color, and develop the pallete from there...

 

[Hirokugawa]

Thats what I mean. I took the base colour of his jacket then expanded from there with shadings and the like