cartoony ogre type deal battler

[sixtyandaquarter]

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I'm kind of trying to keep it cartoony looking, hence the black outline and even the black inner detail lines.  The simplistic shade and color choices.  I really don't like though, speaking of color, the fact that I don't have a highlight shade but I thought that best.  I also don't like the browns in the club/tree limb weapon, they don't seem to go well.

Some kind of ogre or generic monster, whatever.
Any comments on bettering it would be much appreciated

 

[WeaponOD]

All i could say is add more contrast to the green, and work on the club's shading, it doesn't look nice.

Besides that it looks pretty damn good! :thumb:

 

[Tindy]

Looks like a monster from Scooby Doo.

I think you can make the dark shade on the club a hair lighter, though.

 

[Toams]

I don't like that there's a curve in the club at the exact point that it crosses the leg, that's awkward.
I don't like a lot of the thinner lines, that represent muscle or bone structures, like on the hand, and on the chin.

I DO like the style you're in, though you're right about the brown on the club.
The detail lines mix too much with the darker brown.

 

[Venetia]

I like that your sprites are always so original in shape and posture . They have a lot of character.

Aside from what's been mentioned already, you need to work on your palette. The clothes are semi-alright (that particular shade of purple isn't very appealing and the highlight/shade are too similar in hue), but the skin is comprised entirely of very light tones, which stands out in an ugly way against the very black outlines.

 

[Karasawa]

It reminds me of Mother series monster sprites. I like this, because the style is original. Maybe add some age to that club, maybe some dried blood?

 

[Despain]

your lines are incredibly messy.

 

[006]

This is just a quick edit, but shouldn't the foot look more like this? Rather then being jagged!
http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/8766/newoldbc9.png[/imgzoom]
^^Yes I know I made its foot too fat!
I like the ogre's posture though, like said before though, the ogre's skin palette needs a little more contrast.

Edit: Missingno- Sorry, sorry, I added it! I hope you were talking to me!

 

[Despain]

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