C&C pls?

[uzi8]

Here something i did in 12 minutes:

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So, is it good or bad for that time?
What about the amount of details?

Pls, I really need some critique :smile:

 

[Mascarpone]

spend more than 12 minutes on your drawings.

 

[mila2]

it look bad but of you did it quick it not your fault spend more time and
make the body shorter she's too tall in the stomach and the stomach need to be a bit wider and it looks like you spend more then 12 mins because the build lines make that known but i guess it's slightly good over all but take more time to detail

 

[uzi8]

XD, I usually do, but this was just to see how fast I can be, and how many details I can add in a short period of time. (Not saying that I can draw much better when i spend more time on it --')

 

[badmonur]

reminds me of the first bomberman game, but whatever, spend more than 12m drawing and work on your proportioning

 

[DJ]

12m? that's too short time for drawing.
Spend more time on drawing and also you have to color it
and especially, top clothings looks little bit weird.

 

[DJ]

12m? that's too short time for drawing.
Spend more time on drawing and also you have to color it
and especially, top clothings looks little bit weird.