C&C on my Face-draws | Colorings

[Esper]

Hi..
At the Moment, i´m creating a great RPG ( great means big ^^ ). So the standard Faces i collected from everywhere, doesn´t fill all my Usages.

So i create own ones.
here´re some:

Spoiler: Paper & Pencil

http://bilder.rmxpworld.de/Nevertold/ART_Illarithe.png[/img]http://bilder.rmxpworld.de/Nevertold/ART_Arec.png[/img]http://bilder.rmxpworld.de/Nevertold/ART_Kiss-Kiss.png[/img]http://bilder.rmxpworld.de/Nevertold/ART_Elena.png[/img]http://bilder.rmxpworld.de/Nevertold/ART_Christophe.png[/img]

Spoiler: Colored

own
http://bilder.rmxpworld.de/Nevertold/Face_Axxis.png[/img]http://bilder.rmxpworld.de/Nevertold/Face_Illarithe.png[/img]http://bilder.rmxpworld.de/Nevertold/Face_Arec.png[/img]http://bilder.rmxpworld.de/Nevertold/Face_Kiss-Kiss.png[/img]
remade
http://bilder.rmxpworld.de/Nevertold/Face_Isho.png[/img]

please say what your meaning is. ( DO NOT USE AT OWN THINGS )

 

[k3v_man]

i liked the coloring you addedto your sketch. idk if i like the drawn ones but that is just my preference, lol but then again its a hell of a lot better than what i can do

 

[moog]

Reminds me a bit of Kazuki Takahashi's style of art.

 

[GrooveMan.exe]

The bangs fall into the rather cliche categories of 'over one eye', or 'mother fucking huge'. There are more hairstyles in existance than that. D=

The anatomy and perspective of the econd pencil drawing feels a little off. The colouring method is good, though.

 

[zeldrak]

the faces are a bit long, and they're kinda leaned.

Other than that, you're on a good way to making your custom graphics.

if you look around for my request shop, i make free face sets.

 

[Esper]

I colored the second one...

@zeldrak:
Requested some ^^

 

[k3v_man]

whats good about both of them is you use the same style for both :thumb:

lol i think that is the most important part of it

 

[Esper]

Thanks..
I tested them ingame with some VX facesets.. in my opinion, they fit each other. That´s my main point of making this ^^.

Ps.:  3rd face colored
Ps2.: Added a new face ( the green/orange/red slime chubby )
Ps3.: Added a rebuilt of a Naramura Face ( i use this for my hero )

 

[zeldrak]

A good thing for you to improve is to look for a basic anatomy reference. If you look at this guys gallery: http://what-i-do-is-secret.deviantart.com/ and look in his gallery where his tutorials and references are, you'll see that he has a very defined style and uses different structures for his characters.

If you want to give a more appealing look to your characters, i suggest giving them something on their design that makes them stand out from the rest of the cast. Each character is unique, much like a living creature, and you need to bring them to life as they were such.

 

[Esper]

XD.. i´m german..  english tuts are hell for me ^^
I´m on these two:

http://www.mangaka.de/zeichenkurs/ (with Videos)
http://www.myu-myu.de/sites/framesets/zeichenkurs_link.htm


But i only need one more face + these i requested at your Thread.. The rest is simple Naramura redraw ( see the last guy in the startpost ).

 

[Esper]

One new Paper and pencil Face is added.
tried to give him a ignoring faceing..