Breeze Spriting! [Work in Progress]

[SteelReserve]

I'm working on spriting.
Since I have no talent in that area.
I thought I'd try to do one.
[The Breeze template is so cute!]

Spoiler

http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x90/AtomiccChild/breeze-templatemalecopy.png[/IMG]I think it's turning out, very... ok.

Update!: The hair is all finished Whoo!
Though it didn't turn out as I thought it would.
Oh well!
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x90/ ... copy-1.png[/IMG]

Any Comments/ Critiques are welcome.

 

[Musashi]

Looking good so far! My only advice would is put a little tiny bit more highlight around the hair.

 

[SteelReserve]

I shall work on it

 

[Ratty524]

The hair is a bit weird to me, but somewhat likable as it looks artistic.

Great job Jucy... IMEAN LucyBomb.

 

[Venetia]

It's cute, and it's NEKKID!

ZOMG

But yeah add a few lightened shades around the highlights in the hair's outline, and a little on the curl, and you'll be good there.

 

[Sles]

The hair appears very stringy. Is that what you were going for?