Breeze Houses to BR

[ramonzinbastos]

MAJOR EDIT:

Ok, here it is, no texts, free to use, and to join the BR!
it still need something.. in the woods for example, if u can make it, ill be glad =]

http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh88 ... mple-1.png[/img]

PS: i need artists to help me with my game i can´t do everything alone =/, the history is VERY good, a routerist (he is a real routerist ^^ and he is my friend) writed it.. more info at ramonzinbastos@hotmail.com


please credit.

 

[Sonata]

Ugh, please take off the text. It's really hard to critique with such a huge distraction.

 

[Axerax]

Of what I can actually see from the text, it is pretty good, just hard to see your details cause of the text.

 

[seven]

The green text is making me go cross-eyed.
  -KRoP

 

[The Data Mage]

Put the text BEHIND the image. Nobody will bother to try and steal it then.

You'll find 90% of the stuff stolen on here are sprites or anything ready to use without effort... Anything that would require compiling isn't worth stealing because the new users can't do anything with it.

Doesn't look too bad... though it looks like a golden sun rip, blown up and pixel-fixed.

 

[Macro]

Looking beyond the text, everything looks pretty cool except for the rock house (Not the bricks, the rock) the rocks are very I'll placed and that house wouldn't hold up to much at all.

 

[tai]

Ow. my eyes. If you insist on watermarking it like that, then just use a dark colour.

The adobe and the brick look good, but the rocks need working on. With rocks of those size you're going to have to make them tile at least left-right and maybe even up-down or it's really going to stand out as awkward. The straw rooves are too yellow, the fainter one looks much better (though this may differ screen-to-screen). And the bottom-right house looks like its made out of rocks of gold, I don't know if that's what you intend, but its way too saturated for my likings.

 

[The Data Mage]

I would suggest making the house shapes a little more like they do in the original games. They have a certain charm about them.

http://www.e-lation.net/site/img/histor ... en_sun.jpg[/img]
Does the style require crediting? Dunno either way. Good work.

 

[ramonzinbastos]

Thanks for the advices, but i really need this to be unique =/ so im not removing the text, and
Alicix, yea they have charm, but it doesnt fit with the style of my game ^^ thanks

ah, the last rock houses aint supposed to be a house.. well. i cant tell it now xD

 

[The Data Mage]

You cant really call it unique when its just a straightened out version of Golden Sun... heh either way, least it looks okay.

 

[ramonzinbastos]

unique i mean is only my game has it till i release ^^

 

[The Data Mage]

But its not like people will look at your your game and say "Wow, this is inovative, stunning and UNIQUE!"... it will be "Hey cool, it looks like golden sun" lol

 

[Xaixis]

I like it! Good work. But as stated before, try looking at some stone buildings and see how the stones are places. It looks fake-ish.

But other than that, good work. I hope you release this stuff to the public because it's just amazing.

 

[ramonzinbastos]

Well, i decided to release it to the public, at the BR, whenever i get my laptop back x.x
and i'm also needing people to form an equip to help with the game im making.. ill make a post later..  ^^  let the BR grow again! \o/

 

[Xaixis]

An equip? If you mean format, and if you will let me, I can import them into my Breeze Demo which is recognized by Axerax himself as a formatted resource base.

If not then, what do you mean?

 

[ramonzinbastos]

i mean a team ^^
you can put it at ur demo, i downloaded it,  its good, nice work..

btw i helped ur city to grow lol

 

[Xaixis]

Haha thank you and thank you! ^.^

 

[Clizzz]

Hey Ramon, Long time, no see. From what I can see, this looks pretty good, of course, I can't really tell because of the trans text. Anyways, Good Luck with it.

 

[Despain]

impossible to critique with such a fucking heavy watermark

 

[tai]

impossible to critique with such a fucking heavy watermark

hmm, i didn't know we were allowed to be so crude =P

If you're going to release it, might you show us a version without the text, since it'll be public anyway?