Breeze Character

[mccdlibby]

I have never really done any spriting before, well that was "original". Anyways, just wanted to get some CnC on this. I know I only used 3 shades, I will add more when I get home, I gotta go for a bit. Anyways, I was mainly wondering, on the side view is the black part of the shirt (The "V" Shape) correct. Is that how it would actually look from front to side?

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Also is the hair correct/good too?

 

[green raven]

Imho you should try out some lighter colours, use my palettes if you can't create them yourself, also you should make the outlines only 1px widht and keep in mind that you are the same hight at sideview as you are in front or backview.

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