[BR] Heinze's Gallery Of Breezes

[Heinze]

Hi there.. My name is Heinze... I new here, i'm a spriter and i opened this topic because in the Breeze Revolution they sad if i put some Breeze sprites in the forum they will see and think if it will be placed in the site or not... I don't if RPG RPG Revolution is the right place... but in anycases...

Here goes

http://i43.servimg.com/u/f43/12/33/30/58/naruto10.png[/imgzoom]http://i43.servimg.com/u/f43/12/33/30/58/goku_b10.png[/imgzoom]
http://i43.servimg.com/u/f43/12/33/30/58/zuko_b10.png[/imgzoom]http://i43.servimg.com/u/f43/12/33/30/58/red_fr10.png[/imgzoom]

Okay then.. i used the style of JDSlash.. JDSlasha ... Idon't know XD
But.. What do you think?

 

[Despain]

use imgzoom. here we're more in favor of giving ACTUAL CRITICISM on pixel art than on rrr, where i'm sure they're more than happy to just say "it rules lol!" without even looking at your work in detail

 

[Heinze]

I going toh put the zoom :P
you're right looking by this side the sprite look so normal.. With zoom you be able to see it beter... How much zoom i'll put?

 

[Despain]

You can actually just use the tag instead of and it will allow us to zoom in while looking at it.

 

[Heinze]

imgzoom added.. Waiting for criticism

 

[Luthur]

They're really good! The second one is the best. The first ones hair is a bit off, but other than that, they're great!

 

[Heinze]

Thank you i'm going to make some more...

 

[RealCheater0190]

I like them really!the style is great!Keep it up!

 

[Heinze]

Thanks ^^

The style is of a spriter called JD... And I liked the style and now i making these chars... In one week i'll post a pack with some chars.. 100% by me.. without any theme of anime (Like those)(Sorry Bad english.. in Brazil we speak portuguese :D)

 

[Grathea]

1) The hair is all pillow shaded.
2) Shade under the second guy's hair.
3) Third guy's side animation is wrong. The hair should actually come around the side. Copy paste will not work here.

...apologize for the brevity of this critique. Circumstances conspire.

 

[Heinze]

Okay ^^
I'm here to make my skill better criticism is the first step... I bad with hair... Where can i find a hair spriting tutorial? Can you give me a link? I want to make best chars

 

[Heinze]

Well... Everybody come here.. To see my chars... Come take'em (I think.. Because some people take it without permission) BUT NOBODY WANT TO reply.. Can Someone give me a feedback? ó.ò

 

[ramonzinbastos]

nice work =]
but i dont like the outline. ^^

 

[Scorpius]

nice work =]
but i dont like the outline. ^^

I think the outline is perfect. It catches your attention don't it?

 

[ramonzinbastos]

nice work =]
but i dont like the outline. ^^

I think the outline is perfect. It catches your attention don't it?

yea xD thats why i dont like it, i think it "hide" the errors. its just opnions ^^

 

[Heinze]

That's why i like the style XD

 

[Heinze]

Nobody want to see my new projects...
I started to work on isometric breeze poses.. After completed Midnight Breeze char i going to make some poses... Making the IMBreeze more Accessible