Book cover help (asap please)

[zchin]

I'm participating in the Nanowrimo this year and decided that it would be good practice to try and use my new tablet... But I need help with the cloth, it's not right, and before I go on and do it badly throughout the drawing, I stopped and am asking for help with this...

I'm currently using Painters Essentials 4. I'm not concerned about the face or hair, just mainly the jacket and shirt, just cloth is what's making me stop and try to fix it... :huh:

Any help would be really appreciated, I need to get working on this asap.

Thank you and have a wonderful day!

 

[Vampdzl]

The tilt of the head is a bit off the design looks gd tho bt the shading is a bit to dark nd the dodge you used on the face is a bit to bright(unless ur gna add a vivid lightsource) you should prolly draw the other arm as well it would make it look better bt other than that its really gd, your gettin better btw :]