Blacksmith

[Kross]

Check out this blacksmith I just got finished making:

http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/8554/blacksmithgk5.png[/IMG]

 

[Jstreet]

Very bad job. You have no shading at all. It looks flat and boxy.

 

[rakim]

This is your first? It is not very beautiful and the chestnut is ugly…
For a beginning it is not so badly. You will improve

 

[jimbimanim]

...It's alright for a first try.

Whats with the red eyes?

 

[Berserker]

For the belt try to make it rounded, which will help it become less flat. Same goes for the hat/hair, gloves and the shirt/apron.

Also I suggest doing some shading or else it WILL look flat.

Keep on trying though.

 

[Afro Samurai]

Practise makes perfect.
Keep working and you'll get better and better.

 

[Despain v.1]

Evrything is squares, your colors are terribly flat, and the outlines look fucking terrible.

This is one of the worst sprites I've seen in a long time. Congratulations.

 

[Kross]

Okay, thanks for the tips. I'll try harder and make a better sprite next time.

Whats with the red eyes?

I just wanted him to have red eyes, thats all.

 

[Showkaizer]

@ kross.

It's true that this is a subpar sprite, But don't let the bad criticism discourage you. If you want to improve , don't make a "next Sprite" just yet. Try finishing this one first. Use what you've been told in this thread to change the appearance of the sprite for the better

@ Despain

Evrything is squares, your colors are terribly flat, and the outlines look fucking terrible.

This is one of the worst sprites I've seen in a long time. Congratulations.

While I appreciate you taking your time out to comment on the sprite, your insulting sarcasm was totally uneccessary. . I understand its your nature to lace nearly every post you make with your testosterone, but understand that this forum (Resource analysis) exists to HELP people , not discourage or belittle them. That is all I'm going to say on the subject.