Battler shading help

[cactus]

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the light source is for the top right if you couldn't tell. I'm having a bit of trouble shading below the collar. Any suggestions would be wonderful. And if it helps i was trying to mimic gozaru's style of shading.

 

[brainstorm]

If you really wanted help with something like this, I would've gone to Design and devolopment and disguised it as something else... The give better advice on things that aren't sprited. But this looks okay. Maybe you should add a little tinting(light) to the right side of the arm for more depth. I also think you should dfine some physical characteristics to the shirt and pants. You know add folds, and make the shirt look less straight and metallic.

 

[cactus]

yah folds always have been my weak spot but i'll give it a shot. Thanks for teh advice