[Battler] Godot.

[MexicanRifleman]

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Intended to be used by the Pokemon starter kit by Poccil

 

[Despain]

Horrible. You have inconsistent pixel sizes.

 

[___]

Yeah at first glance I thought it looked pretty good, but despain is right.  How did you accomplish that?  I would shade the shirt a little more as well, it's a somewhat glossy fabric as you can see in the image in your sig, you should probably have a soft ihghlight across the chest area.  The pants and sleeves also need a shadow, as does the face right below the mask (?).

 

[MexicanRifleman]

Yeah, your right.. This needs more work at it, thanks for pointing the flaw guys! I want to become a better 2D artist so I need all the improvement that I can get.

 

[Mascarpone]

the lines down his chest bug me. he becomes paper and loses his third dimention.

 

[xthexendxhasxcomex]

yeah the lines going straight down kinda bug me...
the lines on his shirt should have some curve to it, because of the shape of his chest.. his chest isn't completely flat..