Banette's Not-So-Beautiful Art Dump (and Stuff)

[Banette]

Gah, sorry I haven't posted anything lately. I've been dealing with trying to find a job and a place to live (my mother and I were evicted from our apartment, but a friend of mine as kindly offered to take me in).

As such, I won't have much in the way of art for a bit of a while (or at least until I find a more reliable computer). Sorry! >.<

 

[Mascarpone]

I decided i didn't like the scribbley line art on your first thing so i made u something clean

Spoiler

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/1655/abababpp0.jpg[/img]

otherwise, it's not too bad.

 

[Banette]

Well, I did it a little sloppily because it was just a random doodle. Usually I'm a lot neater. ^_^;

I like how you've smoothed everything out, but the ends of the tapered lines are a bit too thin for me. ^___^;; Then again, it's not my place to say that, so I'll be quiet now...

 

[Banette]

((Just a question, is it necroposting if it's my own topic? o.o))

Sorry I've been gone a while! I've been travelling around for a convention (Woo ConnectiCon!), and preparing for college. In return, I have a picture I drew as my player character for a browser-based game.

Spoiler: A really small picture. u.u

http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/5373/aeonishyuugask1.jpg[/img]
Not that good, but it was nice practice to work in a constrained space. *nod*

I should have more done, once school kicks in.

 

[Shadow_Strike]

Oooh, what college are you going to?

Also, she looks like something from naruto. Pretty good.

 

[Banette]

University of Bridgeport. It's one of the local colleges, but it's pretty awesome.

Well, the game is kinda a spoof of Naruto, Bleach, and other anime, hence the similar art style. *nod*

Also, I love your signature. :D

 

[Stardust]

((Just a question, is it necroposting if it's my own topic? o.o))

If you have an update, it isn't considered necroposting.

The Naruto-ish one is very good.  You're very talented, and the hand effects are cool.  There are a couple of small things, though.  The face doesn't have much shadowing from what I can see, which looks unnatural.  You should add some shadows where the bangs hang down.  You could also add some sort of highlights to her hair if you wanted.  It would start to veer it away from the anime look a little.