back.. with new shit>.> lol

[Red Wolf]

hi!
some might still know me.. others might not..... most likely not ^^

hmm.. I just wanted to post some of my latest work o.o (not much though... no freaking time)
its all very manga style>.> so if you dont like manga/anime... dont look!!!^^

Spoiler: newest

http://fc24.deviantart.com/fs34/f/2008/312/7/9/colored_evil_cute_girl_o_o_by_RikRedwolf.jpg[/img]

older work:

Spoiler: forest girl

http://fc57.deviantart.com/fs26/f/2008/162/e/7/Forest_Girl___colored_by_RikRedwolf.jpg[/img]

Spoiler: schoolgirl

http://fc65.deviantart.com/fs27/f/2008/138/f/a/my_1st_art_with_tablet___WOOT_by_RikRedwolf.jpg[/img] my 1st drawing with tablet

Spoiler: catgirl

http://fc09.deviantart.com/fs25/f/2008/078/c/d/Kiri_by_RikRedwolf.jpg[/img] hmm.. its really easy made>.> pentool+ vectors

Spoiler: fanart -.-'

http://fc43.deviantart.com/fs24/f/2008/014/4/4/Eve_from_black_Cat_Colored_by_RikRedwolf.jpg[/img]

Spoiler: some chibis

http://fc11.deviantart.com/fs31/f/2008/186/e/d/3_Chibis_by_RikRedwolf.jpg[/img]

much older work xd:

Spoiler: angel

http://fc00.deviantart.com/fs21/f/2007/283/7/b/Angel_by_RikRedwolf.jpg[/img]

Spoiler: test coloring

http://fc62.deviantart.com/fs39/f/2008/320/4/2/test_coloring_by_RikRedwolf.jpg[/img]

Spoiler: sideview face

http://fc88.deviantart.com/fs17/f/2007/197/8/6/sideview_face_by_RikRedwolf.jpg[/img]

Spoiler: blaa?

http://fc63.deviantart.com/fs17/f/2007/178/5/2/cute_girl_3__by_RikRedwolf.jpg[/img]

cya^^

 

[Shadow_Strike]

its all very manga style>.> so if you dont like manga/anime... dont look!!!^^

Its not that I don't like manga style. In fact I think its a great expressionistic style.
What I don't like is why people draw nearly exactly the same kind of main stream manga. Now thats just awful.

But I'm not here to discuss that. I'm here to crit your work.
Your newest one is your strongest one (for probably obvious reason that its your newest one), it has good line and expression. The curve of the body is sleek and works very well. However, the hands are... not very complete. They look very flat and un-handlike. She has no grip on that chain, you try holding a chain with a hook at the end without gripping it like that. It wouldn't work. Also theres no visible palm, you don't need to draw a black line to represent the muscles in the hand, but you could at least shade it so.

The forest girl pose is really stiff, and her expression doesn't match her pose or environment at all. Her arm ends abruptly at the hands, so I'm thinking she doesn't have a hand. And the ps brush is really awfully used. Its blatantly a brush and its just slathered on without much forethought.

 

[Red Wolf]

yea.. well I just made the newest one.. and I hadnt drawed/photoshopped since uhh 4/5 months.. (when I made the forest girl) just to busy -.-' and then I thought WTF.. I havent drawed for a long time.. and apperently I've improved a bit.. though I didnt really do anything XD..

hmm.. about the hands.. I know what you mean.. but I'm just glad I could get the hand a bit looking like a hand though.. I'm still awfull with it.. (a bit better then before though). If you look at the schoolgirl hands.. they are just ..... maybe you shouldnt look o.o they are awfull XD

the forestgirl has no hand .. because its supossed to be going into the ground like a tree.. but i made it in a rush and used the stupid grass brush to be lazy and bleh it looks all a bit weird together.. I agree =)

anyway, Thanks for the comment^^

 

[Mascarpone]

Bodies and more so the hands want lots of help.

 

[DJ]

Quite Neat Drawing!
...But I found you need some efforts on hands, and I think their head is
kind of large.....

 

[Red Wolf]

thanks^^.. hmm.. If the big head is only pointed at the 'newest' then I agree.. a little xd.. although I was making a chibi at that time. It turned out to be a bit in the middle not chibi and not not chibi either.. if you get what im saying

And I dont think it will look better with a smaller head..  but thats just my own opinion ^^

and the hands yea I suck I know XD

 

[DJ]

thanks^^.. hmm.. If the big head is only pointed at the 'newest' then I agree.. a little xd.. although I was making a chibi at that time. It turned out to be a bit in the middle not chibi and not not chibi either.. if you get what im saying

And I dont think it will look better with a smaller head..  but thats just my own opinion ^^

and the hands yea I suck I know XD

If I give 1 more advice, hand should be bigger.
and here are examples of good hand
http://i339.photobucket.com/albums/n460 ... f64ba2.png[/img]

 

[draft92]

Oh, My, God. THESE ARE MAGNIFICENT!

Don't necropost, please. This isn't THAT bad, but it still is an old thread. Be more careful next time.

 

[Shadow_Strike]

Well it would be good to know that if you spread your fingers out, they should cover the surface of your face.
Its also good to know you should draw your hand like 3-5 times a day. But nobody ever does that.