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Rye

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You have no screenshots (aside from your titlescreen), so I don't think you really have anything to show the project discussion forum.
 

Lexy

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so your saying we should make our maps then post a few of the screens of the maps and maybe a menu screenshot then we can go to normal project discusion
 

Lexy

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it may have traversed a bit away from your skeleton so Totti can edit it if he wants anyways do you have a third skeleton you would like me to work on
 
I'm taking a break, from wrapping presents, and I've just read part 2.
Graxiplon, you seem to use a lot of passive voice in your writing, which makes the story seem more vague than it needs to be.
Also, I discourage the use of contractions, they make it look like you took no time in putting the literature together.
When we do release a more detailed version of the background story to the public, i suggest we don't use all the direct quotes, and actually make a story out of it.
Also, no cursing, let's keep foul language out of this game.
 
he's is a contraction for he is

passive voice would be using a being verb (such as is) in past tense situations.

like ~Chance tries to get out, but is blocked by an enemy~
 

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