AVATAR: Legend of Ai & Yu

[uhjunki]

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Water... Earth... Fire... Air.

Long ago the Four-Nations lived together in harmony, But all that changed when the Monkey-King demon, attacked. Only the Avatar, Master of all four elements could stop him. But after sealing the demon, he vanished. 16 years later, I was befriended by the new Avatar...  Two young twin Sages named Ai & Yu. And although their Sage skills are great, they still have a lot to learn before they can master all four elements. Much less save the world…


Characters

Spoiler

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Ai & Yu

http://tokyonights.net/avatar/chara_3.png[/img]
Tilak

http://tokyonights.net/avatar/chara_4.png[/img]
WuKim

http://tokyonights.net/avatar/chara_5.png[/img]
Kinto

http://tokyonights.net/avatar/chara_6.png[/img]
Anzu

http://tokyonights.net/avatar/chara_7.png[/img]
Vijay

http://tokyonights.net/avatar/chara_8.png[/img]
Malu

Features
Your choice of Male and Female starting characters.
Tankentai Side-View Battle System.
Interactive Bending system, using Dargor’s “Blitz Skillâ€

 

[moog]

Your wold map looks so....barren.

You also need a plot dude, or its hard to crit anything else.

 

[uhjunki]

sorry I am still working at getting more of my content up. This is still in development, and the maps are suppose to mimic a pokemon style.

 

[Magicant]

Well, the post is incomplete for starters. You need at least 2 screenshots and I’m not sure if a picture of your characters would count, but I really doubt it. Also your plot is completely missing, so there isn’t much anyone can say about the game. Why you would post without the plot or a synopsis of some sort is beyond me. Your world map is pretty cool though seeing as you created it using a different style from anything I’ve seen so far, but seriously it's really plain looking, add detail.

I’m no fan of the Avatar anime, in fact I hate it.  But until you post a plot I can’t make any sort of informed judgment about your game.

 

[Nachos]

It doesn't matter how many screenshots, was matter is the story, content, what you really have about the game.
Write it. Also, map a little more.

 

[Magicant]

It doesn't matter how many screenshots, was matter is the story, content, what you really have about the game.
Write it. Also, map a little more.

Actually...

"2.) Minimum Posting Requirements for a Project Topic
When you start a project topic, you must have at the very least two screenshots of your work in progress, in addition to one full paragraph of story description.  It shows that you are making a definite effort to make this game a reality, and are not just spouting a random idea that you came up with two seconds ago.

Eventually, we will have a thread where people can post these random ideas, and the rules will be changed to reflect as much.  Until then, please follow these requirements."

 

[Nachos]

"It doesn't matter how many". I meant at least 1, but it doesn't matter if you have 1 or 454.

 

[uhjunki]

I am trying to get all this online, please be patient.

 

[gboichris]

Dude where's the plot and screenies...and is this suppose to be some sort of spinoff!

 

[Despain]

why the fuck do you people put SYSTEM REQUIREMENTS jesus christ we all use the same fucking program here this isn't like HEY CHECK OUT THE GAME I MADE AND DOWNLOAD AND PLAY IT it's HEY FELLOW MAKERS WHAT DO YOU THINK OF THIS ie. we Dont need that crap

seriously whenever someone puts shit like SySTEM REQUIREMENTS it is a SURE SIGN that there's fishing for praise and don't really want any acytual feedback at all

so this thread pretty much can be ignored by everyone NOTHING TO SEE HERE MOVING ON

 

[Macro]

So by what little stroyline you have up so far, it's the same thing as the cartoon except Aang is now twins instead of a 14 year old kid?

 

[uhjunki]

why the fuck do you people put SYSTEM REQUIREMENTS jesus christ we all use the same fucking program here this isn't like HEY CHECK OUT THE GAME I MADE AND DOWNLOAD AND PLAY IT it's HEY FELLOW MAKERS WHAT DO YOU THINK OF THIS ie. we Dont need that crap

seriously whenever someone puts shit like SySTEM REQUIREMENTS it is a SURE SIGN that there's fishing for praise and don't really want any acytual feedback at all

so this thread pretty much can be ignored by everyone NOTHING TO SEE HERE MOVING ON

First off, it is MY topic... Second, everyone may not be as smart as you are, or you think you are and third this is information I have logged for content in a future website I will be making... anyway, now that I am done justifying myself to every on here... I have contacted the mod. sheesh. so up tight...

So by what little stroyline you have up so far, it's the same thing as the cartoon except Aang is now twins instead of a 14 year old kid?

Pretty much...

Don't double post.  Use the modify button next time please. ~The Great Terror

 

[dadevvtsvre]

Okay, that was a little blunt, but he's right, you don't have to put system requirements. And I do believe you need at least two screenshots.

Also, the map seems incredibly small. Houses...on the world map? Make towns, not...houses. It looks so...empty.

(And double posting=no-no, unless you're updating or bumping. it's called the MODIFY button  :wink

 

[So fist]

Uhjunki,

You have 24 hours to update your post so it meets the standards of the project discussion board.  Please refer to other longstanding threads and the rules here for further info. 

Second this is a development forum specifically for RMXP and RMVX.  It is assumed here that everyone knows and has the program and understands the requirements to run it and the games it produces.  That piece of information is useless clutter for our purposes.

The OP expressed that he does not wish to update his post in a pm so I am locking this topic.