Art Dump

[Despain]

Shit I haven't made one of these in a loooong time.

Please be absolutely brutal with the critiques.

Mostly style experimentation(actually pretty much everything in this topic is):
http://bb.xieke.com/files/corporate11.png[/img]

http://bb.xieke.com/files/corporate21.png[/img]

http://bb.xieke.com/files/corporate3.png[/img]

http://bb.xieke.com/files/corporate4.png[/img]
Cute doodle that was in my notes that I couldn't resist uploading.

http://bb.xieke.com/files/cricket.png[/img]
Cricket, a superhero of mine.

http://bb.xieke.com/files/gretchen1.png[/img]
Gretchen Lowhaven, the hero of an old project who I randomly decided to start redesigning a while ago.

http://bb.xieke.com/files/jules.png[/img]

http://bb.xieke.com/files/nigga.png[/img]
bad ass nigga

http://bb.xieke.com/files/pokemon.png[/img]
The Weezing here is my absolutely favorite drawing from the whole bunch.

 

[Venetia]

HOLY S#!T THAT'S A PERFECT WEEZING.

--Sorry, the perfection of it required me to type in caps o_o

I love the first little dude up there at the top. His face, in particular. Very clean and very stylized.

The other human drawings look like the characters are trying to act too severe. They all have pretty much the same facial expression--that look that models get in high-class fashion shoots, that says, "I feel nothing. I'm cool as a cucumber. Buy my shit."

Also, your thumbs are SMALL in most pics. The thumb should be around 5/6ths the length of the index finger.

All the characters with pants on have "highwaters". Remember that pant-cuffs will fall loosely over the shoes and down the back of the heel, even on tall people, if they fit right.

The stock/grip of a handgun should be approximately the same size a large human fist in comparison--yours are teeny.

The shoes lack a lot of detail. Check out a sneaker sometime--they have a lot of seams, most of which should make it into a drawing. Seams in pants or shirts should make it in, too. Makes it look more detailed. Well, I think it looks better, anyhow.

Also it'd be nice if some of these things were "finished" (i.e., ink and/or color, etc)

I don't know ...... I can't be brutal. I have too many other, nice things to say. But I won't say them! That's brutal, right?

... Okay, not really. But I tried!

 

[kyonides]

the man on the 1st pic looks like he has a girl's hips, I think...
now I believe Steelix and Diglet may coexist somehow...
Edit:
I forgot that... It's been a while since I played pokemon... or even watched the series...

 

[JD_Slasha]

the man on the 1st pic looks like he has a girl's hips, I think...
now I believe Onyx and Diglet may coexist somehow...

That's STEELIX! >=0!

lol yeah anyways. Des, I really wanna' see some trainer designs. You know you wanna....