Anyone like this?

[Keegzilla]

does anyone like my spaceship. PLZ tell the truth cuz i can make this better. These are also my first sprites from scratch.
http://img242.imageshack.us/my.php?image=vehicleuz5.png
I'm not done yet.

 

[Sonata]

Right now it's very flat. You should try your hand at shading to give it some depth.

 

[Keegzilla]

got an update and i hope this aint double posting
http://img80.imageshack.us/my.php?image=vehicleqx4.png

 

[006]

It still looks flat in some areas, especially the side views.

 

[Keegzilla]

i'm never gonna get it right am i.

 

[Sonata]

It's a little better. I'll assume you're not using this alongside the RTP? You should also lose the black outline, use something that fits in with your red palette.

 

[Keegzilla]

i was thinkin of that but i cant figure where to put each colour in.

thanks sonata, it looks better now!

Updated yet again, doesn't really look different.
http://img383.imageshack.us/my.php?image=vehicleib0.png

 

[Lexy]

The cockpit looks good now but the engines are still flat try to darken them a bit and see how it comes out.

 

[Keegzilla]

it's updated again

 

[Lexy]

Much better.

 

[Keegzilla]

so anyone got anything else that they think needs improving?