Any ideas on how to continue my song?

[Zethus]

well i'm making a kinda classical song that kinda just came... and i don't know how to continue this one because i'm out of ideas.

got any tips?, C & C or whatever..

Song here

 

[shownomercy77]

kinda repetitive, and awfuly mixed... but it has potential. more expert people will maybe give you some suggestion about this in the next comments.

 

[Demosthenes2k8]

It sounds...unusual. Maybe find a way to cause it too "grow", then get softer and more gentle?

 

[wolfturn]

on the "Growing" idea i think maybe add a bit more to the bass Add a nice Crecendo (I Might spell a lot of things wrong, Just bear with me :P) Bring the melody into very high notes for a couple measures and then run it back into middle, Bring the base up with the high notes. maybe? Lots of things you could do, if i think of something, i'll be sure to record it and put it up. Thats a Really nice song there though.