Ameth III (feedback plz!)
- Thread starter 9robin3
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I read the story, and I just don't know where the heck is ameth 1 but I'd rather not look at it, people would be more interested if you didn't bother to re-type some explanations on characters and stuff unless the game is all the rage or something, but that almost never happens around this forum to anyone... The mapping is square and it looks like you've abused the tiles, but the base mountains would be a good map for an ABS congratz on that. The tiles do not match the rtp so try to just go and stay with the starry night panorama. Also I was reading your signature, and honestly, you wouldn't hired you until you practice you story writing first. When creating a game, if it isn't very successful then don't try and make a sequel. Also I never get those things, I've always thought the leader of the game is the one who made the story in the first place, ah well.
There are also small tid-bit things you can do to improve your game and maybe lighten up your criticism, and might but people a lot.
1. Try to be consistent, the characters should be facing one way with the same color background.
2. The title screen has to have meaning, not just some cool picture of something totally random.
3. When you make sub titles to separate sections, change the font size to Large
That's about it, good luck on your project, and also, if you like the story concept then the best thing to do is re-write it and change things that are cliche redo it all if you must, or just start all over, and the popular games that inspire everyone, if you make a game off of those ideas, then your one of many.
Don't take this harsh or offensive in any way please.
Thank you and have a nice day!
There are also small tid-bit things you can do to improve your game and maybe lighten up your criticism, and might but people a lot.
1. Try to be consistent, the characters should be facing one way with the same color background.
2. The title screen has to have meaning, not just some cool picture of something totally random.
3. When you make sub titles to separate sections, change the font size to Large
That's about it, good luck on your project, and also, if you like the story concept then the best thing to do is re-write it and change things that are cliche redo it all if you must, or just start all over, and the popular games that inspire everyone, if you make a game off of those ideas, then your one of many.
Don't take this harsh or offensive in any way please.
Thank you and have a nice day!
I got a suggestion that could help improve the story a lot, why not change the swords into little elemental animals that are sacred and hold a bunch of power for you to manipulate, I thought this would be a good idea because I've heard people use swords, lances, stones, gems, but never little cute pets of awesome destruction, but this is just a suggestion...
Thank you and have a nice day!
Thank you and have a nice day!
coyotecraft
Sponsor
I played the demo. What a mess.
You need to learn how to tell a story. It's all in the presentation.
You need to learn how to tell a story. It's all in the presentation.
coyotecraft
Sponsor
You start the game off with a backstory. A lot of games do this. But then all of a sudden for no reason you're on a map with these girls saying they are going to take a sword. And then they disappear. And then you find your freinds. And then you have go to a cave.
What the hell is going on? You have to stop and explain things.
You wrote all this information in your thread but non of it is actually in the game.
What the hell is going on? You have to stop and explain things.
You wrote all this information in your thread but non of it is actually in the game.
