Ameritania Level 1 (Unfinished) Demo! (Help)

[Ameritania]

First off I'd like to say if I'm posting this in the wrong topic I'm terribly sorry.  Haven't been to this site in quite awhile and a lot of things have changed lol   :crazy:

Ameritania is one long quest, which may soon be made into a multiplayer game (If I can do this right).  I've got part of level one up for grabs if anyone wants to download it and try it out.

There's more information on my main site than I could possibly write here within the 25 minutes before my next class starts.  I will, however, add a few screenshots and such here just to give you a feel of what the game is like...

Here's the main website --> http://ameritania.fairstopic.com   :thumb:

Basically the reason I'm posting this here is because I'm having a writers block of sorts.  I'm unsure of where to go next.  I've already got some help from some other people, and I'm already working on changing some parts of the quests.  (For example, there's one part of one of the quests where you can just go into a hotel room for free.  I'm planning on adding a mini-game where you get to cook for the cook of the town to earn money in order to rent a room to investigate the hotel.)

I know this version isn't PERFECT by any means, that's why I'm asking for your help to make this game amazing! :P

Here's some screenies of some of the maps I have so far...

Description:  This is one of many (very hard) mazes I've got added in this game.  In this maze you're looking for a something that can fix a broken pathway that leads to the key to a miniboss.
http://ameritania.fairtopic.com/users/a ... 00x600.jpg[/img]

Description: This is a small screenshot of one of the towns you have to investigate (I'm going to add more side stories and miniquests in this area for sure)
http://ameritania.fairtopic.com/users/a ... erit17.jpg[/img]

If you want to see more screenshots of my beta go here.

If this is in the wrong section, I'm incredibley sorry once again.  Please just give me some constructive criticism and such   (This might need to be moved to the Early Projects section, I'm not sure  :crazy: )

Thank you! :D

PS. To download the game you must go to my site @ http://ameritania.fairtopic.com and create an account and go to the downloads section on the forums.  Thank you once again!   If you have any problems feel free to post them here or on the site.

 

[Xathia Vastar]

That maze looks very tedious. I hope you're not going to have random encounters in there, also.

 

[lorddonk]

It looks alright, from what you've given us. The maps aren't real great but there not too bad. And I like the name. But that's really all there is to say.

You haven't given us any information on the game. You need to post the story here, characters, etc.

You could benefit from reading this topic: http://www.rmxp.org/forums/index.php?topic=38618.0 It will show you how to update your thread to make it look better.

I believe its a requirement of this forum to post a download link here, as opposed to "go to my website, create an account, and go to the downloads section". (Why would you make it a hassle for people to test if for you?) You need to take a lot of the stuff that is on your site (by the way the link doesn't even work) and put it here if you truly want more comments.