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AmeriKKKan Gangster: Hood Property

WARNING!  UNLESS YOU ARE A PERSON WHO'S WILLING TO SEE A GAME OF HIP-HOP GHETTO CULTURE BE MADE, DO NOT READ ANY FURTHER!


Story
The story section has no direct summary, but instead has 3 entries of different people talking bout the STory

Backstory
The 1980s an 90s.  The Time of Flat-Tops, Hoes, an Gold Chains.  But Most of All the time of Rap.  Naw, not dat Shit on Ya Phone.  I'm Talkin bout da Gangsta Shit.  Ice-T, Dre, Cube, Wu-Tang.  Da Time When LA Wuz always on da news.  Riots, Crackhead Fights, 7-day Gang Warz.  Yeah, dat wuz da shit!  Anyway, so even though I liked dat shit, there wuz one thang missin:My hood wasnt on da Map.  Capriwood, Los Angeles.  Where alot of Gang Wars and Drug Trade ruled whole streets.  But in Capriwood,my nig, there wuz always dat sayin:"Get Down Or Lay Down."  You had to be rollin in a gang to survive in Capriwood.  The Clacc Crips ruled North Capriwood, and the Richy Rocc Crips ruuled East Capriwood.  Them two wuz always at it, since they weree rival sets.  Da Bloods ruled South Capriwood, and West Capriwood wuz filled with dem oye gangs, The Latin Kings, and 18th Street.   But there wuz this one nigga dat didnt choose a side!  Naw, nigga didnt run away, whats wrong wit you?  Nigga Made a side!  Dat's right, I'm talkin bout ma Boy Devon Taylor!

--Reese Washington, Inn Prison, 2002.   


Mr. Wakeem Wilson's, of American Gangster, Log, July 2002.
Today's the day I meet Reese Wahington, one of Devon Taylor's old "souljahs", currently locked up in prison.  People in Capriwood-no, people in South LA seem to love Taylor, especially Capriwood.  What the hell for, though?  All he's done is killed people, sold drugs, and pretty much help ruin South LA.  They always talk about how O.G. He was, how real he was.  But to me, he seems to be just a fake little punk.  Perhaps Washinton can prove me wrong.


Old Police Investigation by Officer Carl Thomas, Cut Down  and Dumbed Down to the parts about Devon Taylor

Date:December 25th, 1989
Crime: Murder(of 10 people), shooting using illegal weapons

Devon Taylor was with his brother,Treyvon Taylor, and friends at a party.  When suddenly, A Blue convertible,suspected to be a Crip car, performed a drive-by on Bloods at the party.  This provoked a 15-minute shootout, in which Taylor's brother and friends were killed.  When the case was dropped due to lack of info. 6 days later, police said that Taylor snapped, vowing to get revenge, saying since the police cant do their job, he'll do it himself.  When Police came to check on Taylor 2 weeks later, they were informed by family members that Taylor went off to start his own gang to fight the gangsters who've stolen the lives of his loved ones, as well as others.  Although my fellow officers have underestimated Taylor so far, I have a bad feeling in my stomach that this Taylor will soon be a force to be feared.


American Gangster opening statement
The year is 2002, and the age of Crack and Gangsta Rap has long since ended.  The West Coast's Rap Status is fading, while the South's rising.  But one thing the West Coast will always be remembered for besides Gangsta Rap is Devon Taylor, the founder of the Def Ridge Families.  From a depressed 19-yr. old mourning his brother and friend's death, to a kingpin that's still young, in his early 30s to be exact,  American Gangster will tell you the story of one of the greatest West Coast Gangsters that ever lived.


Devon Taylor, American Gangster.



Characters

[Reese Washington
One of Devon's old souljahs, he's currently serving time in prison.  He being interviewed by Wakeem Wilson, for the TV showAmerican Gangster.  He's the narrator of the game.

Devon Taylor
The main character of the game.  When he was 19, his brother and friend were shot and killed by Crips at a Christmas party.  He held a strong grudge against gangsters for a while, and hoped the police would have justice served.  But when the police closed the case because there wasnt enough info., He decided to make his own gang.  Taylor and his gang, the Def Ridge Families, would go on in crime history as one of the biggest gangs that couldn't be taken down.  His legacy got so large, that the TV show American Gangster, wants to do a show about him.  He's currently 32 in the game's present time (which is 2002.)

Mr. Wakeem Wilson
A man who works for American Gangster, he's digging up info. on Taylor for an episode of the show.  He's currently interviewing Reese Washington, one of Taylor's souljahs, before he got in jail.  Wilson at first believed Taylor was nothing but a fake punk, but got more an more intrigued when he started to hear the full story, which makes him desperate to meet Taylor himself.

Treyvon Taylor
Devon's younger brother, Treyvon was known for his smart mouth.  In fact, some people say that the some of the Crip gangsters purposely shot Treyvon because of this.

Jamiel Walker
Devon's friend that was also killed at the party, Jameil was a Richy Rocc Crip.  No one knows why didnt the attacking Crips stop shooting when they saw him, which they did, so its believed they were rival Crips.

Rashad Thornton
Devon's very best friend, he helped assemble members for Def Ridge.  He helped Devon a whole lot when Devon was depressed, and helps Devon get new weapons and contacts during the course of the game.

Isiah Washington(Not related to Reese Washington)
A businessman who knows Rashad.  He'll give Devon various tasks to take out his competition, in return, he'll supply Def Ridge with money.

KeKe Taylor
Devon's sister, she's always in the next drug, which kind of saddens Devon.  She tells Devon of whats going on in his old street.

Clifford "Dawggy" Richards
One of Devon's first recruit for the Def Ridge Families.  Dawggy's what Devon calls a "dopey", or crackhead.  He's a radical gangster, who shoots anything not Def Ridge, and always tries to steal big weapons.  Some say the crack's what makes him so crazy.

Haji "Haha" Wakashi
A Yakuza member who operates underground races, he informs Devon of new races and new cars being released.

As of now, this game's status is back to at least 15%.  I had to redo the characters, so these are all I have.

Gamgs

Cripcuz
The Crip is one of the oldest Black Ghetto gangs in history.  While its original leader got killed, it still remains a Powerhouse in Urban Gangs.  Crips are well-known to fight their own sets.  Their colors are Blue and White.

The Bloods
The Bloods were originally Crips and various other gangs, but when Crip-on-Crip voilence started, the Bloods were made.  Their colors are Red and White.




Features
*An entertaining storyline, spanning over 10 hours(and counting!)
*Take down the other competition with Fists,Guns, Shivs, and More!
*Get money by Theft, getting items for Pawn SHops, Selling Dope, Extotrtion, and more!
*New Dope Deealing System allows for you to get a drug or even create your own drug(or fake drug), sell it, and oversee its span to the rest of the world!
*Do missions or free roam around the beautiful (well, in name anyway) Los Angeles in the Age of Crack!
*Buy out certain businesses or Hotspots, and expand your Gang's power even more!
*Bring out Da Big Gunz, with the G.L.O.C.K System.  Dis arm and steal your enemy's weapons, take over their munition houses, and have them crying for mercy against their own weapons!
*Features music from N.W.A, Public Enemy, Wu-Tang, Ice-T, and many more!
*If you dont like Rap, Import your own Muzak to the game using SephirothSpawn's Music Player script!

WIP Feaures
*Gangsta Tactics System allows you to send Gang members to do work for you, such as buying out a business, steal cars, or invading enemy turf!
*Car Modification System



Screenies
All screens depict a work in progress  THESE ARE REALLY BAD OUTDATED MAPS.  I'LL PUT NEW ONES SOMETIME SOON!.
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Final Notes
Yes, this used to be Simple Gears, the game with mechs and rap.  But the whole combo was getting frustrating, and it was hard trying to make the game believable.  So I sat down and re made the story.  Please, I need everyone's help on this.  Please critic this. 

Also, the characters, and gangs in this game, as well as Capriwood, don't exist.  So dont try going to LA to see Capriwood , cuz you'd be really disappointed.


Peace,
Tach
 

GNB

Member

Seems like a nice start but what is the point later in the game? to stop thoose Sigmas? But he still got one, himself. right?? :)
 
The main motive in the 1st half of the game is to get back at Shugo, while using the Sigmas at certain joints around the world to get money, however when the real antagonist appears, they have to travel  universe to stop them.  Think of the 1st half as one big prolouge.
 
I love it!  :lol: I like the whole part about how Leon is set up by his old friend and now he has to get back at him. This storyline isn't realy used that offen. It's normaly a quest or a mission to do better or find something out but not so much from the revenge angle. All the same I like the use of your character. He seems like a misfit for a hero character and is realy out of the norm for main characters. I like to use Misfits and parties of regects for games becuse its a lot more relistic. I see how you try to go about a mech story in the gettos and at frist I realy had my doubts but I was surprised on how it was exicuted.

Well with all of that good I have some bad. It's not that your game is bad but you need to explain some more. Some more history and story would be nice. Just so you can give people a better idea for your game. Imagination is a wild thing and if you don't give people enough info they tend to go wild with it. (Personaly from what I read I fell like the 2ed part is going to be like a big space interglatic war against the military and Leon and the 3rd party that set leon up.) If thats wrong then you might what to explain a bit more. If thats right then you have nothing to worry about. Lol.

Thats about it. From what I'v read so far I would have to give the story a nice 7/10. Would give it higher but as I said I just need some more info. You should get HyperCam 2 and record a movie for Youtube and put the hyperlink here. It's just an idea and it dosn't have to be anything spiecal but you it will just be a little something to show people what your game looks and feels like. After that you might get a little bit more feed back.

Well I hope thats enough info for you.  :smile: I'll keep this sited and see how its going. Expect to see me again. Best of luck and keep up the good work.  :thumb:
 
@Necrile:Thanks for your support!  But I can almost garantuee you that the military wont have a big part in the storyline.  There will be 2 military characters that join, but aside from that nope!
 
Interesting. Then I wonder who the main protaganest will be. Man now I want a demo! :pissed: Well your clearly a great writer and I'm sure your storyline will get everyone who plays hooked. Just remeber a good storyline is good but you got to keep up with gameplay value to! Anyway, best of luck to ya. I got this bookmarked now and I'll be glad to support you. As long as I'm welcomed here you can expect a lot of feedback from me. Keep up the good work!  :thumb:
 
@Necrile:Dont worry, I already have a demo, but I want to get some real feedback first.  Once I think I have enough, I'll
ask for it to be moved.

Also, I have another update:  I added another 2 more characters in the Character section.
 
LOL I like the new characters! It seems like your trying to push not just a good game with a stroy line but a whole sexest movement! (Rrrr.... not the bad kind. I don't know what the good one is called. =3) Man the cathlics are going to hate this one. Anyway. I think its a nice touch. It seems like your willing to take your game to places a lot of other people won't. Also, (Not to sound raciest or anything) you have a nice mix of diffrent races in your game which now a days is saddly depleating. (I'm can thing of right now 10 games with one token black guy or like the one mexican guy that just kinda hangs around). It's kinda of nice to finaly see someone final pushing the envelope on this one and makeing a game not only origional but touches on a lot of real life topics that might be considerd "Taboo" or are just passed over! Some people might give you some crap about maybe being to mature or something, but it's not that bad. Anyway before I get to off topic I just wanted to say that I love your story line and your characters and your originality and ability to push real life points almost brings me to tears!  :cry: Lol. Good work man! You'll have to PM me when the games done!

(Sorry for the exsess rant. 8 dr. peppers will do that to ya.)
 
Major Updates:Added a little bit more info on Abel, Cain, Roy, and added 1 more character, and added alot more on the
History tab
 
I normally don't like mecha (one of my least favorite genres) but the original twist you're giving them is very nice.  Kind of like the future of weapons trading.

Your history has a nice timeline which clearly expresses the past, although I didn't much like the whole bit of aliens contacting earth.  But I guess if it wasn't for the aliens coming, Earth wouldn't have advanced so far, right?  How much do these alien visitors actually affect the story?  They're hardly mentioned after the history.

The story is pretty good, but how does Leon find a mecha in his own shop?  That part doesn't make sense at all.  Also, how is he left for dead?

The characters section has nice detail on the characters.  I do think that you posted too many characters in the same spoiler though.  Maybe you should better organize as "protagonists", "antagonists", and "other" or something.  You could also be more detailed on what weapons the ridas typically use. (e.g. mecha gun, mecha sword, mecha whip, etc.)

Overall the game looks great and has potential, but you should really put more detail on the story.  The history could use some more detail too, but looks okay the way it is.  Just the story gaps like how Leon got that sigma and what is the plot after he gets back at Leon?  There is story past that, right?

Good luck.  :thumb:
 
MukanshinBlack":25cnyp7u said:
I normally don't like mecha (one of my least favorite genres) but the original twist you're giving them is very nice.  Kind of like the future of weapons trading.

Your history has a nice timeline which clearly expresses the past, although I didn't much like the whole bit of aliens contacting earth.  But I guess if it wasn't for the aliens coming, Earth wouldn't have advanced so far, right?  How much do these alien visitors actually affect the story?  They're hardly mentioned after the history.

The story is pretty good, but how does Leon find a mecha in his own shop?  That part doesn't make sense at all.  Also, how is he left for dead?

The characters section has nice detail on the characters.  I do think that you posted too many characters in the same spoiler though.  Maybe you should better organize as "protagonists", "antagonists", and "other" or something.  You could also be more detailed on what weapons the ridas typically use. (e.g. mecha gun, mecha sword, mecha whip, etc.)

Overall the game looks great and has potential, but you should really put more detail on the story.  The history could use some more detail too, but looks okay the way it is.  Just the story gaps like how Leon got that sigma and what is the plot after he gets back at Leon?  There is story past that, right?

Good luck.  :thumb:

Since Leon inherited the shop/house(they're both) from his dad, it means his dad was an illegal dealer or maybe a Rida, if you need any more info, just lemme know.
 
Thanks for all the feedback, guys.  I added a major update:info. on the second half.  It's a slightly big spoiler so unless you want the game ruined for you, dont read.

I also reorgonized the characters.  They all belong to certain groups now.

Check back soon because I'm going to add more detail.
 
Be awhile since I lasted checked in. I would like to say that it seems to be going along great! Seems like your getting everything pinged out! (BTW I avoided the spoiler lol) Hope that our advice has helped with your game in anyway. I'll comeback later to offer some construtive critisisum. But untill then, bed...
 
Thank you everyone who gave me feedback on this thread.  In the next week, I'm going to
report this thread to a mod for a move to Project Discussion.  That's right!  You'll be able to see some of the game!  Check back soon.
 
You had me here:
WARNING!  UNLESS YOU ARE A PERSON WHO'S WILLING TO SEE A UNIQUE BLEND OF HIP-HOP GHETTO CULTURE AND WALKING MECHS BE MADE, DO NOT READ ANY FURTHER!
I've never seen this done before. Your story is original and interesting. It's like I can relate to the characters because some of their situations are happening in real life.
For example, when Leon's business is close to running out of business, that would certain ly drive him to do things, even if they are illegal, to support himself.
The characters are nicely done. The bisexual woman, Ashley was very well thought out. Her stand on bisexuality could be used to enhance your story for sure. Oh, and by the way I'm catholic, but I say let lying dogs lie.

The history is also good. You summed it up with a time line, which I think is more effective than just text.

The only thing I thought was bad right now is what inconsiderateblack mentioned about the story gap. But you cleared that up nicely, too.
The storyline also hints at what kind of battle style to expect: Mecha. Ti think that it's a great mix.

Overall, I give it a : 7.0/10
6.9 Presentation

?.? Graphics

?.? Sound

?.? Gameplay

7.0/?.? Lasting Appeal (Pre-game/Post-game)

7.0    Overall(out of 10 / not an average)
How do I add the userbars?
 
Im a MGS fan + fan of crunk music

This project sounds really interesting =)
I never heard of a RPG maker project combining these two things (science fiction and hiphop).
I really look foward to see how u combined these two things.

Looking foward to the demo

EDIT: Going to support you with the userbar =P
 
thanks everyone for your support.  As you can see, Simple Gears is now in Proj. Dicsuccion.

that means Im getting closer to completion!

BTW,Update:Screenies(duh)
 
Eh' Def row.
If you want me to, I could make a littlemore 'Spiffy' Userbar if you wan't me to...
(Nobody Like's amity's Userbar generator 2.0....)
 

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