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The bike is looking better. I only have a litlle bit of time, but I think you did it a little too much. Make it one pixel thinner (only the top deepening part, though) and see how that looks.
 
Btw, i'd like to note im currently taking request for any sprites done on this template, or modifications of this template, etc etc
 
The girl just looks like a skinny male. Why did you thin her butt area? Her waist should go in and her thighs jut out and those shoulders are too large.

The arms on all of them are too short. They should stop at mid thigh not at the crotch.
 
I made the arms that way. It was made like that to fit White Ties battlers. And I think that that's his teen male. If the one in the post above is the one you're talking about.

Edit: Though the teen male does look funky.
 

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To be fair, White Ties battlers rarely stand up straight. However, when they come close, such as the man to the left of your signature, it's clear that their arms do reach the normal span -- the span Raven mentioned.

Including the proper proportions would juts make it look better, too. At least... Well, let's see it in practice, at least, so we can deliver a verdict. : P
 
I set it to exact proportions (though I made the head a bit smaller) as Saffy when he stands up straight in one of his victory poses. I drew the side view outline by drawing it over him, then I set guidelines to have his legs the same length, his arms the same length, etc, for the frontview. It really is set to look like White Ties.
 
ZephyrSkye":25bxsn3j said:
Sorry about that. My computer is crashed. I keep checking this on other computers, which I wouldn't be able to make something like a battler for if you paid me. But, yes, I took some of his hair for that.

Oh, well is it okay if I complete it?

Bestone":25bxsn3j said:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v176/ ... yarmor.png[/img]

Cyclone body armor, for use with the bike

now with helmety goodness
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v176/ ... armo2r.png[/img]

One helmet is kinda see-through, the other is not, cool eh?

That looks like Zero from Megaman Zero.
 

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