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Although I think you should make the contrast between the leg stepping forward and one staying back more.

On the dress, there is a slight shadow on the back leg, but I think you should pull the shadow out more.
 
An aprin strap visable on the front view would help a lot. I didn't realize it was one and not part of the dress until I saw it on the side. I don't really like that darkest green color on the out line. It looks way too differnt from the rest of the colors. So I would lighten that up a bit.
 
You make very nice hair. Just wanted to mention that ^_~

(I can't see or critique color usage at work since I have crummy monitors that're wayyy dark.)
 
Venetia":4e1f92an said:
You make very nice hair. Just wanted to mention that ^_~

(I can't see or critique color usage at work since I have crummy monitors that're wayyy dark.)
Thank you.  I like doing hair, for the most part.  Side views are still kind of weird to do.

Nphyx":4e1f92an said:
They're all looking really nice now, you definitely have some talent. : )
ZephyrSkye":4e1f92an said:
No, I like it now. 100% better.
Thanks. ^__^
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Here's an update on the dress:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v473/ ... erlady.gif[/img]
 

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