Akira/ Kaneda's motorcycle WIP

[SakuraPhoenix]

I need some C & C please ^^;

When I first started to teach myself spriting I made this

http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n225 ... RAbike.png[/IMG]

then I found out that it isn't the correct angle, So I scratched the project and put it on hold till I could fig. out what to do and got distracted and forgot about it >.<.

So I'm having another go at it again with this one
http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n225 ... daBike.png[/IMG]

http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n225 ... aBike2.png[/IMG]

but I'm still having problems with angles, shading and something else is off that I can't quite put my finger on.

 

[Rye]

It looks awfully small from front and back views, like a huge chunk is missing. But the sides look wonderful. O.O

[EDIT]
Whoops! I guess I should stop and read! >< Sorry, I don't know what to do about the perspective.

 

[ZephyrSkye]

Ummm.... I think that the only new one she has is the side one. Why the front and side views looked funny were because she said she had the perspective off.

Hey, kieraphoenix, I like the new bike. One question. Have you tried putting a guy on it? I think that would help fix any further perspective problems.

 

[slydeltah]

Looks great. But it's missing a shadow (under the bike and wheels). Definetly finish this one

 

[SakuraPhoenix]

@Rye, tis okay^^ still thanks for the compliment. Hopefully the revised version will live up to the first try. I really wish there was a motorcycle template.

@zephyr; Yes I've tried, still can't figure it out though. Too many curves and different angles of objects, it was easier when I was only doing computer terminals -_-;

I'll get it someday, hopefully...

 

[Giam]

The new ones looks like its wheels isn't round. Maybe thats your problem? And I think its tilted to much toward the screen.

 

[SakuraPhoenix]

The wheel is round, I prob need to make the top part a shade more darker to make it stand out more, if you look closely you can see what I mean.

As for the tilt, I think that's the correct perspective. I'm not sure I don't really have a template to study off of I'm kinda "winging" it.

Anyone know of one? Please share!^^

 

[Kuri$u]

Awwww, you got me wanting to watch Akira again. :p
The sprites look pretty awesome.