ahh, the pencil and the paper :3 (56k warning)

[nosferatu]

well, this is some of my sketchy works i'd like to share with you all.
yes, i know. Some of them might be a bit off, or maybe they all look like rubbish but remember, please keep the critism at a good level :toot:
( the only thing i realy would want critism on is the blue painting with the red dude(wich i will be updating) )
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/7209/img0036bn8.th.jpg[/img]
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/8820/img0033dz1.th.jpg[/img]
http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/2809/379be020697bc55ea385490mt2.th.jpg[/img]
http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/491/img0037hg6.th.jpg[/img]

- edit
and a little update from the redhead (more updates to come)
http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/2486/img0046jx7.th.jpg[/img] blurred
http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/340/img0045ey0.th.jpg[/img]
bad angle

 

[Jason]

I'm gonna be honest with you here, I think the one you want C&C on (Blue BG Red Person) is kind of umm... crappy ?

However, the bald guy on the last pic is looking really good.

PS. EWW, MARILYN MANSON !!!

 

[Despain]

I'm gonna be honest with you here, I think the one you want C&C on (Blue BG Red Person) is kind of umm... crappy ?

That's not valid C&C, bubsy. Try pointing out why you think it's crappy.

 

[$t3v0]

I'm gonna be honest with you here, I think the one you want C&C on (Blue BG Red Person) is kind of umm... crappy ?

I personally like it. I especially like the hair!
Portraits that use bold strokes leave more imagination and "eye squinting" If that makes sense :x

 

[nosferatu]

I'm gonna be honest with you here, I think the one you want C&C on (Blue BG Red Person) is kind of umm... crappy ?

However, the bald guy on the last pic is looking really good.

PS. EWW, MARILYN MANSON !!!

hahah yeah i see what you mean, but it's not nearly finished as it is just a rough sketch, i'm going to add a body, shadows, light, skin, eyes, e.tc
P.S, yeah I don't know why i did a marilyn manson painting, must be a year old or so
D.S, thanks for the comment on the bald guy! if you didn't notice, I tryed make him look like Vern Schillinger from OZ

 

[Jason]

I'm gonna be honest with you here, I think the one you want C&C on (Blue BG Red Person) is kind of umm... crappy ?

However, the bald guy on the last pic is looking really good.

PS. EWW, MARILYN MANSON !!!

hahah yeah i see what you mean, but it's not nearly finished as it is just a rough sketch, i'm going to add a body, shadows, light, skin, eyes, e.tc
P.S, yeah I don't know why i did a marilyn manson painting, must be a year old or so
D.S, thanks for the comment on the bald guy! if you didn't notice, I tryed make him look like Vern Schillinger from OZ

Whats D.S ? Don't send ? Lol.

Okay Des, I'll say why I don't like it, lol.

It might still be in early stages, but the lines seem too thick, something about the hair baffles me, and It looks like his mouth is drooping over to the left or something, lol.

 

[Ratty524]

Whats D.S ? Don't send ? Lol.

Okay Des, I'll say why I don't like it, lol.

It might still be in early stages, but the lines seem too thick, something about the hair baffles me, and It looks like his mouth is drooping over to the left or something, lol.

... I don't see your point, pal. What exactly is the problem?

*Ratty sighs and slams a cream pie into Atemu's face for banning him from IRC* I really don't see any problems with these at all, I especially love how you sketched that face using... Ballpoint pen? They're pretty nice to me.

 

[Emtch]

Pretty good, like the last one. The sig is even better: "Bygg massförstörelsevapen med Mulle Meck"

 

[nosferatu]

and a little update from the redhead (more updates to come)
http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/2486/img0046jx7.th.jpg[/img] blurred
http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/340/img0045ey0.th.jpg[/img]
bad angle

Pretty good, like the last one. The sig is even better: "Bygg massförstörelsevapen med Mulle Meck"

hahah yeah, as soon as i get my hands on some mulle meck material it's the start of a great game