Abandoned House . Breeze

[ramonzinbastos]

Hey there, i just made this abandoned house to my project.. is it good?
how can i improve it? PLEASE, do not use this...

http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh88 ... os/aee.png[/imgzoom]

 

[Nickster]

doesnt breeze have quite a bit less shading than that? like A LOT less?

 

[Tindy]

It doesn't look right for breeze, but if you want to expand on that a bit I think it'd make an excellent addition to RTP.

 

[Xaixis]

Here is the comparison with RTP
http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/2612 ... ezexx8.png[/img]

I think you should simplfy it? I think it would be fine if you somehow made it so the character's head (in Breeze) would be over the house like RTP. Otherwise it looks boxed.

Whether that's with editing the tileset or just moving down the image on the tileset a few pixels I don't know. But it's just my 2 cents.

(Also sorry for being slow on the spriting, I have been really busy in real life. I will try to pick it up but things are a little hairy over here hehe)

 

[ramonzinbastos]

Well.. my game is gonna be like that, since the graphics are all custom ^^ if its not breeze, errr... idk whats that, its my style then =]

@Xaixis: Ah, its easy to solve, just move the img a bit in the tileset ^^.
(dont need to worry, real life first)

 

[Xaixis]

Ok well I love the style, it's kickass. Keep at it. And your right a simple move in the pixels will make it work, I can work that out if you need me too.


And thanks, I'm still trying though! Hehe