A Wip Panorama

[Vorpal 86]

Hello. This here is a panorama I'm working on. I renderd the clouds in Photoshop, but they seem to be out of the style of the rest of the panorama. What can I add or remove to make this a bit nicer? Maybe blend the mountain colors a bit into the clouds? Thanks.

EDIT: Removed image from this post and updated it on the new post. No sence in having the same image twice, well kinda' the same image.

 

[Despain v.1]

I love it. Make some more in the style and they could definitely have their uses.

And agreed on blending the mountins a bit. It's in the distance, so it should be a bit fuzzy. You might actually be able to just use the blur filter.

 

[ryanwh]

The clouds are indeed out of place. I'd suggest perhaps applying the cutout filter to them, so they have the same cell shaded style as the rest.

 

[Vorpal 86]

@Despain; Thanks, i'll see what I can do with Photoshop. I've only used it a few times.

@ryanwh; Ok. I'll try and see what I come with. I want to add some detail to the mountains and horizon manually.

Thanks!

 

[Vorpal 86]

Here is the next update. I just added a Smudge Stick filter with a 2px width, 0 highlight area and a 10 scale intensity.

Hows this? I forot to mention; I haven't fixed the seamless tileing pattern on each side yet..

Thanks for any comments.

EDIT: Removed image from this post and updated it on the new post. No sence in having the same image twice, well kinda' the same image.

 

[Anonymous]

The bright green strip behind the trees is a little distracting. Is that supposed to be plains? It might be better to have more mountains there, or move the trees up to cover it.

 

[Vorpal 86]

@ccoa; Ok, i'll try turning the green into a hazed-out lake, sound good?

Thanks for the comments. It helps a lot!

 

[Vorpal 86]

I've taken the advice. I removed the green horizon and replaced it with water. I also made it tile left to right seamlessly. I fixed the cloud that made it tile wrong and turned it into a mountain.

Any more comments will be appreciated.

Thanks

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