A song I wrote Entitled - Love, so Gentle In My....

[mareru]

Just a Little Song I wrote Entitled:

Love, so Gentle In My View, Should Be so Tyrannous and Rough In Proof!
Written by:Me

What sadness lengthens my hours?
Not having that which makes them short.
Smoke surrounds me in this hour,
But when the smoke has cleared
A fire sparkles in my lovers’ eyes.

I have lost myself; I am not here
This is not me, I am somewhere else.
I have been hit with the arrow, the arrow of love
For with beauty is where my soul rests
A fire sparkles in my lovers’ eyes

I measure her affections by my own
But she is where my affections truly root from
I try to pursue her love not openhanded to my own
I steal home heavily, because of our fray
A fire sparkles in my lovers’ eyes

In this sense of state I wilt
Not at her, but at my own foolishness
But to myself so secret and so close,
I am so far from sounding and discovery
A fire sparkles in my lovers’ eyes

Love, So Gentle In My View,
Should be so Tyrannous and Rough In Prof!


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[Shizu]

I'm about 1/4 awake but I can feel that it's a song that could be sung while playing a guitar. Usually i'm not the biigggest fan of lovey stuff, but this one can turn into something fairly well with the right melody.

Wait... I just read the title. .. :X woops.