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Dead Content A knights remorse... Chprt1 (Much more detailed topic...)

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Im sorry if this thread is screwed up... this is the first time i've done one but here it goes...


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Story

Game play time About 1-4 hours depending if you buy ur house and what not els...


Basically, you're a knight, or mainly whatever you want, and in the begining you are called upon
by the duke so you can take care of a problem, and unfortunatly, the problem is this guy named Oscar summoned this
demon so he can rule the earth, see now Oscar is the main badguy and Oscar is reborn every 100 years and it so Happens
to be that Oscar Used Ralph's (You) mothers body to be reborn once again... and as legend knows it whoever's mother's
Body he uses the son/daughter is supposed to be the only one to kill him... but other than that the character that is you
is a leader of the White Knights Legion, and you're the king of Zyran castle, and you're brother is Weigraff wich is the leader of the
black Knights and under the First Duke's Control (The One in the begining of stoy) But after you Try to fight the demon the first time, you take place 10 years in the future, and you're now the leader of the white knights and so on, and when you're try to fight the demon, you're a part of the black knights legion, trying to follow in you're brothers footsteps... and for you're dad, you dont know where he is but im shure i'll add an intersting side quest to finding him =D


Features:
Allright, throughout the game you might find some new features you might not of seen before...
like for one that i completely made up is Buying a house, you can buy a house and upgrade it and so on,
but the house you can buy is weak and remember, its still in beta... But aside that, i got it in order to get better weapons
and armor you need to level up in a class, there's 3 teirs, 1 is with sword 2 is with bow and 3 is with magic, you can choose wichever class you like, and you can be anyone you want, I have a class changer so that when you unlock that class you can change back to it at any time, and not only that im going to add so that you can have special classes and wich you can only
unlock at certain times in the game... and eventually you can work you'reself up to the last class wich is the Ultima class, basically, you can weild anything and what not els... Oh and what about Skills? in my game you have to purchase them.. and you may be worried about what characters get what? thats why i have seperate quest and what not els for different main charackters... so dont worry, it will not be confusing at all =D Oh and im using rpg tanketai battle system =D





Credits:WHoever made rpg tanketai side view battler and me!





And now for the download LINK!!!! i hope you all enjoy very much!!!

http://rapidshare.com/files/249677269/K ... _.rar.html
 
Alrighty:

Story: Utterly confusing and manilla. Put some more work into it. To may random things are happening. Its a typical fight the demon that has revived story. BORING. Originality is the key to a good game. Its cliche.

Your mapping is bad too. Too much blank space and what not. Try adding more stuff and making maps smaller. Does that hedge maze passage really have to be so big. Go to the mapping improvement thread and get some help. Alos, LunarEcclipse has a great thread on mapping in Vx.

To me, this is another typical first Rpg game. Put some more work into it.

Also organize your thread better. Those paragraphs are hard to read. Add some structure instead of block of words.

When you use a spoiler, you put what you want in betwween each spoiler.

EXAMPLE.

put words in between those two things.

Hi :)
 

Syr

Member

I didn't download this because the story confused me....

But I think the tileset looks pretty good.


Also that big "ole" light on the first pic heh.
 
You still haven't fixed your thread. Put your text and image URLs inside the two tags that say something like [,spoiler]--Place text/image URLs here--[,/spoiler]
 

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