A Journey Through Time I: The Medalion

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A Journey Through Time I: The Medalion[/FONT]

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Legend I

1000 Year's ago a mysterious group of heros free'd the land from demons. But without them the Mana balance became unbalanced and almost every species in the world of Araties became extinct.

The priest's prayed for this wrong to be writed for it to be done over and one demon be left. But the angel's left the world when there earthly enemys, The Demons, got killed off.

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Rumors I

Theres Rumors that the king has sent his best soldier, Barietos, to steal a item of great value.

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Characters


Aluxes
Age:10
Class:Squire
Weapon Of Choice: Sword
Info: The Game's Hero he takes his brother's medalion and tries to track him down, when his brothers killed by Barietos and his child hood friend is kidnapped, He is sent on a Journey filled with Peril.
Image: http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j107/FA99/f1.png[/IMG]


Tristan
Age: 12
Class:Thief
Weapon Of Choice: Dagger
Info:Aluxes' friend, a orphan who is being trained by Aluxes' brother
image:http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j107/FA99/t1.png[/IMG]


Tiffany:
Age: 10
Class:Priest
Weapon Of Choice: Staff
info: Aluxes' childhood friend, Aluxes' has a secret love intrest with her.
image: http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j107/FA99/c5.png[/IMG]


Kara:
Age:11
Class:kittix Priest
Weapon Of Choice: Cutlass
info: she joins shortly after the medalion activates and has the power to not only deal damage but heal, has a love intrest with aluxes
image: http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j107/FA99/f7.png[/IMG]


Polly
Age:12
Class:Pirate Priest
Weapon Of Choice: Dagger
info: takes care of your boat, has love intrest with Aluxes
image:http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j107/FA99/t4.png[/IMG]


Thrilaron
Age:23
Class:Retired Knight
Weapon Of Choice: Sword
info: Aluxes' brother, also train tristan and tiffany.
image: http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j107/FA99/o1.png[/IMG]

more comeing soon

 

[CorporateGreed]

1. There's little information available. You only have some characters,
A vague legend, and a rumor. That doesn't tell us much about your
systems, what you try to do with this project, or actually, well, anything.

2. When you have so little text, it's quite senseless to put it behind a
[content hidded]. Especially when the information in them doesn't add
up to anything, it can become annoying. It feels like I just wasted my
time doing all those extra clicks.

Add more information, and maybe next time, you can post your project
when you actually have something to show?

 

[Pyromanga]

C to the L to the I to the C to the H to the E.
Seriously man, Do not use 1000 years, that's so old it ate dino burgers, and caution using "Aluxes" as the main character, people tend to be drawn away from that, and the Demon And Angel thing. Massive Cliche Overload. more cliched things:
Band of heroes
Mana
Bam. So basically, if you change those, it'll be better. Good Luck.

 

[Volrath]

Take it easy, spanky. Having a "band of heroes" and using "mana" don't strike me as cliche, it's more like conventional fantasy. Nothing wrong with those things in itself, it's the overall presentation that makes it work or not work.

For my part, I'm a little troubled by the fact that every female character listed has a "love interest" with Aluxes, even the catgirl. Especially when they're all apparently small children.

 

[otaniyul]

yeah, it could sound like those stories that the main charac is some looser and all girls fall for him...
I'm not saying the plot is bad or anything 'cause there's not much info yet, but the first impression... well, you get it...

 

[Kojo]

Poor Poor Tristan. Nobody is at all interested in him..
Aside, those facesets look nice, and the plot is short and sweet.. But perhaps too short and sweet. Consider making the posts hole a bit more value and information. Hope to see more!