A HK need C&C =P

[Sen]

I will make a Game in this Style,
so i need to now what and how
i can do it better^^
It takes 20min

http://img-up.net/img/Schirtte_bxUDCVZV.png[/IMG]

Spoiler: Credits

Hair ~ Ragnarok (i cant make Hair.. ~.~)
Pallettes ~ Colormagix
Chara ~ Sen
Template ~ Showkaizer

 

[Ratty524]

I remember how you used to steal resources, looks like a great HK in my eyes.

 

[Loofah]

did you actually make the hair? The reason I ask this is because most of your sprites use hair from other peoples sprites.

Aside from that the character looks alright, but I think that cloth should wrap right around her rigth leg.

 

[Dark Koji]

Seems like the hair is from Ragnarok Online:

Spoiler

http://mitglied.lycos.de/swigun/Sprite/Head/Female/22_f.gif[/IMG]

Overall, the character is not bad, I guess.

 

[Malachi]

Ratty that is completely unnecessary. Bringing that up will only result in people questioning whether he made it in the first place.

ANYWAY!

I really like it! I like it a lot! Next thing to do is edit the template itself! Maybe add some shadow on the skin, I dunno. I can't really see anything wrong with it except maybe the clothes are a little too bright for the template.

 

[saikyo765]

Personally, I think it's really rad.
Great job.

 

[Mundane]

Honestly, Ratty made a good move saying that. It could cause more trouble if he starts using stolen shit.

 

[Xcelled]

Actually when I read Ratty's post it reminded me to go find the original creators of HK and jot there names down so thanks for that.

About the sprite I like it, its a neat outfit design, since you using that head might wanna make the shoulder's less broad the shoulders, and shade the skin like malick said. I'm not that great of a spriter myself so I can't really give you a lot of advice.

 

[Despain]

I suggest that you don't use the Colormagix color palettes. They really aren't that good. The sprite looks pretty flat because of it.

 

[Venetia]

Yeah, the contrast needs to be upped to compliment the skin contrast. Never realized Raganarok hair looked so good on HK's though :'3

 

[Sen]

thx for the great c&c

and.. did someone see the spoiler namend CREDITS? xDD
There stand that the hair is from Ragnarok ~.~

Hmm have someone a better palette?

 

[Ratty524]

It's not too hard to create your own. Read one of the threads in the pixel academy, it'll help you a lot.

 

[LegACy]

pillow-shaded

you need to set one light source, and highlight the areas that hit directly with it, and shadowing the area that's not hit with the light. for instance, the bottom of the cloth should be shadowed, since I believe it is not hit with the light, and it's blocked by the legs, etc.

And yea, for light colored palletes, you need high contrast