A Dragon Legacy :Corected Version

[nohmaan]

As well sorry for putting anything close to flaming Lene, I never intended for it to get out of hand, I was just making a strong example to read over other projects to be sure you aren't essentially stealing or copying ideas, make something your own and it is fine and dandy even if it has a few parts that resemble cliche work

I think it's pretty presumtuous on your part to react like that. This is his idea, so it is his own work. I do agree that the characters seem a bit young for their professions, but its not unusual for younger characters to be able to do extraordinary things in animes/games.

I think people tend to forget sometimes, these are RMXP games, and even if its close to an idea thats already been used, the purpose is to give users the ability to channel their own thoughts or dreams of what a great game would be into a playable project.

 

[Genji The Katana weilder]

Sorry but I was making young characters but they are at thease ages in the begining only and the game Final Fantasy Tactics Advance starts with kids about 10-13.(i finished the game and unloked the judgeMaster)
By the way the twelve years old won a junior class tournement at scool witch made him a spear master for his age.
By the way i'm a poor level Maker the only project that i made for practis that i liked was a game about a kid named Demiane and lived whith his parents and didint no how to read but alwaese worked on the farm but that wonce meet a beatiful riche girl......NANANA and BLABLABLA but its a rpgm 2000 creation

 

[Siege]

One thing i would advise is getting someone to go through your game, that has good knowledge of english. Your spelling and grammar is poor. The game looks okay.

 

[Axerax]

As well I also suggest that you disable smilies in the first post, it is conflicting with some of the descriptions...

As to other people who have said stuff about dragon riders... In my game I am planning on coining the term Wyvra Rider because that is my version to avoid any of this nonsense with dragonriders... I have a huge prequel idea behind my games which explains in great detail how many of the classes and races came about. I was simply giving him a warning if he ever decided to release this for sale, otherwise it may get a thrashing in the real world.

Keep up the work Genji, I'm not putting you down, I just want to look out for ya

PS, please try to get someone to revise your english, tis a little poor as people said, sometimes I can hardly understand it.

 

[Genji The Katana weilder]

i just desided to change dragon rider for Drakys THANKS for the tips