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[LosAngeles]

After consideration, this project won't be developed any further...

 

[battlestar_caprica]

First post! Woot!
Your characters look great and I like the screenshots, very colourful and vibrant (even the blue trees fit nicely lol) But the 3rd screen of the castle looks a little empty. I know it's hard to make a large path without it being empty... Try maybe adding in a few more NPC's to make it look more populated.

Look forward to seeing this game finished,
PS Acclise AND Croji are awesome! They're already my favourite characters lol.

EDIT: I also noticed an error in the first screenshot; windows should never be placed on wooden beams. If you're not sure what i'm talking about i can explain, but it's frowned upon by many 'professional' mappers at these forums.

 

[Spiritual]

Just as a side note, the "The Purple Doom" words are a bit hard to read. Maybe try lightening up the purple a bit?

The story sounds all right, although I'm confused as to why a dynasty is perishing, and why the people hate the Royal family/Aristocrats so much that they choose to rebel.

I think you went a bit overboard with the statistics for the characters -- which you introduced a lot of. I doubt anyone is going to remember most of the facts, especially since we haven't met the characters yet in game.

Anyway, I'm interested in seeing how this game will turn out. Good luck.

 

[G-man]

Wow this and Nanao's thread look the best in early project layout. It looks like you have a colorful cast of character, although I must say from the colors and layout, this is going to be a lighthearted game? I agree on the characters part....Leave some room for surprise, I bet you just put all of your party on here.....at this point no one cares about your characters....you should include only key characters that matter to the story and leave the other party members to the players imagination, heck you might as well have posted the ending XD. But overall Good layout I give it a 6\10

 

[Seafoam]

I like your mapping/tilesets
even the blue trees
Sounds good so far.

 

[LosAngeles]

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[G-man]

ah well done then XD

 

[Ratty524]

This such a great presentation, the title kind of turned me off for a second, though. xD

Your maps also look gorgeous, except for an error where one bush is green and the trees have blue leaves, edit that to make it match.

Good luck with the project! *makes big grin*

 

[panzerglamour]

i love the title you got up there, as well as the sprites. looks good :O makes me want to work harder haha

 

[Spiritual]

... My bad. ':| I honestly have no idea how I read it as "The Purple Doom". I must have really bad eyesight, huh?

And your story makes more sense now, since you've explained a bit more of the history.

 

[G-man]

you go it mixed up with Shining Doom wich is also in the early proj. section

 

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[G-man]

O_O I like......

 

[itachi-hime]

Wow what a fantastical game. Its so bright and pretty. It isn't cliche at all, which is good, it's very cute, if you don't mind me saying so. I'm sure it's going to be a very cool game. Great depth of your world and characters.

 

[SteelReserve]

Well it seems good, but kind of generic.

 

[G-man]

This game? This might be one of the few I actually think will make it to a demo! and even possibly completion. Cliche with blue trees eh?

 

[LosAngeles]

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[G-man]

About time an early project I care about is updated ^_^