¤Silence: An Assasin's Tale¤ (Updated 11/8/08) (Demo Coming Soon!)

[The Map Helper]

SILENCE¤An Assassin's Tale¤

"A good killer...Has no friends"

¤Story¤

Spoiler: ¤Prologue¤

¤Your name is Churii. Your a professional hitman, infact, one of the most well known hitmen in the world. You work under Frank, your boss. He gives you the name, you give the blood it's that simple. Killing is your life, you breath, smell, and hear death, everywhere you go. This. Is. Your. Tale

Spoiler: Epilogue

¤It seems as if you do nothing, but killing;however, one day, a young girl, by the name of Ella, finds you. Theres a strange presence about her that makes you happy inside. After going back to the headquarters, you realize that Frank was using you. You suffer a change of heart.
    You decide that you want to cover up any markation of your record as a hitman. you decide to return back to the headquarters, but this time, not to get a mission from him, but to turn on him.

¤"Protagonists"¤

Spoiler: Characters

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Name: Churii. (Renameable)
Age: Late 20's.
Gender: Male
Race: White - Tanned.
Class: Hitman
Additonal Comments:
  The main character of the story. He works under his boss, Frank. He started working for him when he was in his young 20's, and has become well known since then, and is probally the most wanted person in the country --- and countries around it.


Name: Frank
Alias: "The Boss"
Age: Early 50's.
Gender: Male
Race: Unknown
Class: None
Additional Comments:
    Has a strange personality. He works as Churii's boss at the Headquarters, which appears to be a simple apartment on the south side of the city. He is very mysterious in the story, and not much is discovered about him until the end of the story.

¤"Antagonists"¤

Spoiler: Characters

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Name: Curri Cranny
Age: Late 60's.
Gender: Female
Race: African American
Class: None
Additional Comments: The owner of "The Cranny," which is a small shop on the west side of the city, near Mary's house. She has a sweet personality, and she doesn't bother you --- Until Frank tells you, to slaughter her.

(More coming soon ¤)

¤ Scripts, Credits, N' Features ¤

Spoiler: Credits

¤Realistic ABS, by inquistor.
¤Inquistor's Hud
¤8-way directional movement.
¤Time System
¤Weather System
¤SDK
¤Interactive Npc's
¤Custom Tilesets
¤Custom Sprites
¤Custom Title
¤Custom Windowskin
¤Custom Autotiles
¤Custom Battlers*
¤Custom Story Pictures
¤Unique Weapons
¤Unique Armors
¤Lots More...

¤Screenshots¤

Spoiler: Screenies!

Note: In the following screenshots, the ninja's are just a filler until I finish up my actual sprites!
The Menu System:
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Cutscenes:http://i288.photobucket.com/albums/ll170/Moonlightscape/Death.png[/IMGzoom]
The Starting Town: (With custom tilesets!)
http://i288.photobucket.com/albums/ll17 ... Town-1.png[/IMGzoom]
http://i288.photobucket.com/albums/ll17 ... /Town2.png[/IMGzoom]
The Starting town: Indoors (With custom tilesets, again.)
http://i288.photobucket.com/albums/ll17 ... heboss.png[/IMGzoom]
^Tiles not finished, thats why the room looks empty, I haven't finshed the sprites to set into the room.

¤Recruitment¤
  ¤Spriter
  ¤Scripter

 

[Desecration]

I'm sorry you are recruiting a Spriter? Surely with that low, low, low level of effort put into the graphics you can make all the sprites you'll ever need and more within a timeframe of about 20 minutes? The mapping looks very poor at the moment, I cant see any flowers, bushes or even grass variations. The HUD looks really bad at the moment, the glow is far too much and would look a lot better either without it or with a huge change to it. You need to work on your menu system as it is most likely to make players have bleeding to the eyes. All in all you really need to work on this a lot more as it looks pretty thrown together.

 

[The Map Helper]

I'm sorry you are recruiting a Spriter? Surely with that low, low, low level of effort put into the graphics you can make all the sprites you'll ever need and more within a timeframe of about 20 minutes? The mapping looks very poor at the moment, I cant see any flowers, bushes or even grass variations. The HUD looks really bad at the moment, the glow is far too much and would look a lot better either without it or with a huge change to it. You need to work on your menu system as it is most likely to make players have bleeding to the eyes. All in all you really need to work on this a lot more as it looks pretty thrown together.

  The graphics give it a unique feel to it Mrs. Perfect. The menu system, came with Inqustior's Abs on rpgpalace.com. I need a scripter to edit it. I have not gotten around to editing the hud, I will in the near feature. The flowers have not been remade yet-- The RTP hasn't been remade, I mean. When I finish spriting I will add it okay Perfectoration ?

 

[mawk]

Could you please cut the incredibly snarky attitude when addressing criticism? If you pepper people with whiny little-kid insults people who view the thread won't be incredibly eager to give your game a try.

 

[The Map Helper]

Could you please cut the incredibly snarky attitude when addressing criticism? If you pepper people with whiny little-kid insults people who view the thread won't be incredibly eager to give your game a try.

DUDE YOU SAY SNARKY TO! Lol like no one knows what that is, but it's one of my favorite words. Awesome. So any feedback on the game, instead of me?

 

[bubbaclark]

I actually like his graphics like this, I mean they COULD be better. But what is this but another AddictingGame. This is basically what every action/adventure AddictingGame looks like. Some of them are the best on the site. You could be a little more detailed though with grass variations, and put a little more effort into it.

 

[Anonymous]

please stop posting?

 

[The Map Helper]

I actually like his graphics like this, I mean they COULD be better. But what is this but another AddictingGame. This is basically what every action/adventure AddictingGame looks like. Some of them are the best on the site. You could be a little more detailed though with grass variations, and put a little more effort into it.

Any tips on the grass?
And thankyou for a POSITIVE comment for once.
If you want spectacular 3d graphics, go spend $200 on an Xbox 360

 

[Anonymous]

i mean dude come on. i don't know if you're a troll or what but you can't honestly tell me you think this is a good game.

 

[bubbaclark]

I actually like his graphics like this, I mean they COULD be better. But what is this but another AddictingGame. This is basically what every action/adventure AddictingGame looks like. Some of them are the best on the site. You could be a little more detailed though with grass variations, and put a little more effort into it.

Any tips on the grass?
And thankyou for a POSITIVE comment for once.
If you want spectacular 3d graphics, go spend $200 on an Xbox 360

Well yes I have some tips. Maybe you can add dirt patches? Dead grass? Darker grass? Maybe like meadows, with like tall grass? Something of that sort.

 

[Ellie]

The graphics... yes they are unique, but they look nothing like what they are supposed to represent. You have one colour in the whole tree trunk for example, and the leaves themselves... well, they look like ovals with a few lines scribbled randomly in them. Yes, they give it a unique feel, but *in my opinion* not in a good way. Simplicity can be pulled off, but simplicity still requires actual hard work.

Critique and comments does not equal negativity.

Forgive the caps but IF EVERYONE WAS NICE / ACCEPTED EVERYTHING AS GOOD ON AN RMXP FORUM DESIGNED FOR CRITIQUE NOBODY WOULD EVER IMPROVE.

 

[Desecration]

The above posters comment makes any comment about you having original looking art void as I quote; "This is basically what every action/adventure AddictingGame looks like". As for your argument about the CMS comming with the ABS it should be simple to spot the difference between a battle systems code and the menu systems code, mainly because it will most likely be two seperate scripts in the scripts index. Also show us some stuff that has been rather than unfished screenshots with little else other than MSPaint work. Since your last reply about the $200 on an Xbox irritated me so much I decided I would comment on it, 2D games can have awesome graphics too just because yours and a lot of games look like shit not all do. Look at any RPG from the SNES held in high regard by the community and you will see what I mean, those graphics are near perfect in every sense of the word.

Finally I am not a girl, nor do I plan on being any time soon.

 

[bubbaclark]

He atleast improved his graphics a little bit since his last topic. I mean the "Starting Town: Indoors" isnt THAT bad. It could have detail, but I like the stair/floor/table graphic, it looks alright. But I forgot to mention, yes you could improve on your trees. I like your lightposts / roads / Assassin Graphic though, your Assassin Graphic looks like a BomberMan though. :P. Your cutscene is really the only one that's on the edge for me. I mean it looks like its just a random spray paint figure, and one guy has no hand, so if you could make the picture a little more "clearer" that'd be better.


I don't if anyone played this before. But these graphics he's using is like Stick RPG graphics. Stick RPG Graphics look like cheap paint graphics, and yet its a good game. There a little better than TheMapHelper's.

 

[Anonymous]

even disregarding the questionable "style", his mapping is still balls. STARTING TOWN 2 has a thousand streetlights placed with no rhyme or reason. also the street itself is horribly tiled.

 

[Calibre]

It could have detail, but I like the stair/floor/table graphic, it looks alright.

So basically the things that look alright is the stuff from the rtp, stairs and table.

 

[The Map Helper]

It could have detail, but I like the stair/floor/table graphic, it looks alright.

So basically the things that look alright is the stuff from the rtp, stairs and table.

But I didn't use any RTP?

 

[Desecration]

You are just contradiciting yourself now earlier on you said you used the RTP as a base and its clear on that particular map that the objects are just the RTP versions without any shading and your choice of colours. A very poor edit, if you will.

 

[The Map Helper]

You are just contradiciting yourself now earlier on you said you used the RTP as a base and its clear on that particular map that the objects are just the RTP versions without any shading and your choice of colours. A very poor edit, if you will.

I don't recall saying that

 

[Calibre]

http://i288.photobucket.com/albums/ll17 ... heboss.png[/img]

So that table isn't just a recolour of the rtp... It looks that way to me, maybe 'm mental.  The stairs look like it to me too.  Same proportions.  It still even has its shadow, whereas not one other single thing you have does.  Pretty sure you didnt make the streetlamp either.

BOSS: Bring his corpse, dead or alive for monetary incentive... mwhahaha.

 

[WeaponOD]

This game looks awesome, can i donate to help fund for a good scripter and or spriter?