Mai Spooraitz

[MopHead]

Uhh... I like simple edits aslong as they look good... in my opinion I think these ones look good:

v This is my main character Mei.

I'm not done this one but what do you think? It's Shiho from Valkyrie Profile:

And younger Mei:

 

[Hisuwashi]

Excellent, but I think, uh, Mei's hair needs more shades / contrast...

 

[MopHead]

<D someone replied! Thank you. I'll take that into consideration... I actually like the bright colors...

 

[BlueScope]

I absolutely LOVE the Mei hair color ... I have to admit, know that I don't look at the sheet anymore, I can't remember her clothing color ^_^ Well, the hair is amazing and that caught my full attention, so nice work :D

 

[Hisuwashi]

Hehe, no probs ^^ I think they look great.

 

[MopHead]

YAY! I will make more!

 

[NexS]

Mei is really nice... the hair on the middle one is looking good also..
the main thing that i like about mei is that everything seems so peaceful about it.. its nice :D

 

[MopHead]

TY SO MUCH! <3 I love sugar coated compliments! <333

 

[Mac]

Wow these are amazing..you really gotta love the Mei character, you ready for a review? You bet your boots you are!

Good Points

1. The hair on all of them are amazingly well done especially Mei.

2. Mei looks so pure from the choice of palette you have chosen..she just looks like the perfect main character cause she sticks out so much!

3. The clothing design you have done is great...i really admire people that can make great clothing..so well done

Bad Points

1. On Shiho her slothing still needs certain shading...because it just doesnt look right but then again i can see that you still have more to do so :|

Evaluation

These are amazing i really do hope you continue on making them, you have a sure talent there!

 

[MopHead]

Your all in for a treat

I PRESENT TO YOU THE FACESHOTS OF MEI.

Spoiler

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v319/Gabriel_the_Assassin/MeiFaceShots.gif[/IMG]

COMPLETLEY CUSTOM

ownage? ALSO... DO NOT STEAL PLEASE... EVEN IF YOU DO THEY ARE MY STYLE OF FACESHOTS SO MOST PEOPLE WILL KNOW IT WAS ME WHO CREATED THEM AND ALSO YOU WILL BE KNOWN AS A THIEF IF YOU STEAL THEM AND PRESENT THEM TO PEOPLE AS YOUR OWN WITHOUT MY PERMISSION.

 

[BlueScope]

@Mop: You need to brighten the hair of hers to match the characterset ... even if you should've used the same colors, it doesn't look like it ...
The faces theirselves look awesome, but I wonder what the outlines are supposed to be? ^_^

 

[MopHead]

Im confused by your post but they are the same colors as the sprite...

 

[BlueScope]

Okay, easier:

- lighten up the hair color
- explain the pink pattern borders

 

[MopHead]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v319/ ... racter.gif[/IMG]

YO MAI NEW CHARACTER Needs a name... xD

 

[NexS]

darken the shoes :D

umm.... name could be Fleur, or a more japanese name..... Mika, what do you think?

 

[MopHead]

Fleur is flower... not suitable... Also Mika is kinda too sorta (kawaii) type name... I think I got her name... Either Lemuria or Silmeria.

Also how do you do change the title screen image and bgm?

 

[NexS]

in the database-->system

 

[MopHead]

I present Lemurias FACE SHOTS.

Spoiler

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v319/Gabriel_the_Assassin/LemuriaFaceShots.png[/IMG]

 

[NexS]

thats nice but she looks like a ghost because the hair look transparent... maybe try saturating the colours a little bit more..

 

[MopHead]

I think her hair colour should be that way cause if its darker then it won't match the sprite... >_>;

Also she does have a secret to her story about having almost translucent hair.