Zeldrak's Art of Awesome (Maybe Not)

[zeldrak]

Decided to make a topic around here showing my several sketches and stuff.

not much to say about this though :/

here's Fuu, one of the characters of my story, did this just a while ago:
http://tn3-1.deviantart.com/fs25/300W/f ... b5f403.jpg[/img]

I'll post more soon :D

C&C is always appreciated

 

[Necrile]

Wow, very nice. Although, I don't quite understand her pose..

 

[zeldrak]

Wow, very nice. Although, I don't quite understand her pose..

well, i started the sketch off with a lumping pose, but i guess it didn't come out like i'd expect it to.

 

[Noliander]

Her leg is kinda twisted weird.

 

[Jason]

It looks like she's trying to fling herself forwards, like a leap applying all weight to her torso, and her arms have flew back, I can imagine some little noob stood there staring at her boobs and someone saying "Owned" cause they'd knock the noob out haha.

 

[mawk]

I really like the detail you've put into the cloth. I'm still learning how to get all the folds to fall just right. :x

Her left foot seems a little strange compared to her right. If she's jumping, her feet would either be pointed (as the toes push off the ground) or angled for a landing (going by what I've seen, at least) -- judging by the way the rest of her leg is aligned, pointed is probably what you're going for.

That fold of cloth on her left leg nearest the bottom seems kind of strange, too -- is it supposed to be concave or convex? I can't see cloth falling that way in a convex shape normally. Perhaps I'm just looking at it strangely.

Very nice work! I hope you don't mind if I examine these to get pointers for my own art -- mostly regarding cloth.

 

[zeldrak]

I really like the detail you've put into the cloth. I'm still learning how to get all the folds to fall just right. :x

Her left foot seems a little strange compared to her right. If she's jumping, her feet would either be pointed (as the toes push off the ground) or angled for a landing (going by what I've seen, at least) -- judging by the way the rest of her leg is aligned, pointed is probably what you're going for.

That fold of cloth on her left leg nearest the bottom seems kind of strange, too -- is it supposed to be concave or convex? I can't see cloth falling that way in a convex shape normally. Perhaps I'm just looking at it strangely.

Very nice work! I hope you don't mind if I examine these to get pointers for my own art -- mostly regarding cloth.

be my guest, i'll be posting more tomorrow, as i make more concepts for my game.

 

[zeldrak]

http://fc05.deviantart.com/fs26/i/2008/ ... eldrak.jpg

here's a speed paint that turned out to be my best photoshop work XD for all you Avatar fans.

and here's a test me and some mates from school put up. It's called TerminA, and this was the orignal concept for the story, I wrote the story, and 2 of my mates made the character and backgrouds. These pages are now chapter 0, I still haven't finished editing them, so i only got 3 pages done atm.

C&C always welcome :D

http://fc07.deviantart.com/fs28/i/2008/ ... eldrak.jpg
http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs27/i/2008/ ... eldrak.jpg
http://fc07.deviantart.com/fs28/i/2008/ ... eldrak.jpg

fpr those wondering, Shun (the character appearing on these pages) was based on me, and the other main character were based on us and our friends :D

 

[Waiise]

Awesome art you've got! Love the manga, keep at it!

 

[Mascarpone]

nice lines, fluid movement in the pose, i like it actually, even if some of the anatomy is a wee speck broken (IE her left knees is broken from the socket if it's doing that lol). (that's difficult to do btw if you've kept up with my steady stream of bitching at people)

 

[Aepriz]

:shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock:
= no more needs to be said (exept : OMFG ! your awsome .. I hope one day  I'll draw as good as you  :shades

 

[zeldrak]

http://fc08.deviantart.com/fs28/f/2008/ ... eldrak.gif

did this last week, finished it today.