Ys Type Music with a techno-like rythem

[nazra7]

Hi, I tried this style of music from Ys series thats got alot of techno like rythem.

I made this song it's also to show you how much my music creation is progressing. Hopefully I'm getting along well still.

If you can tell me what you think of this song I thank you.

Equinox.mp3:
http://www.box.net/shared/xd9yc6u2as

 

[Emtch]

Well, I feel it never really starts, like it's all an intro. Could work for dungeons or long boss battles though.

 

[pestilence]

I quite like it.
I agree with Emtch, it would probably work well for a dungeon, long battle, stuff like that.
Maybe have a faster/ more up tempo bit somewhere?