Moogleking
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Hi, I hope this is the correct place to post this. I'm looking for some feedback and criticism on a writing project I've been doing. It's a fantasy/adventure type story. The few people I've asked to read it so far have enjoyed it, so I'm trying to get some broader feedback. The tentative title is "Shapeless".
I'm also thinking of making this into a RMXP game, which is partly why I'm posting it on this board.
You can find my story either at fictionpress: http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2398615/1/
Or you can download a zip containing the word doc's: http://filebox.vt.edu/users/dktaylor/Stuff/shortstory.zip
I'm still not happy with the prologue, so don't let that turn you off. Try to read at least chapter 1. Also, the map contained in the zip file is extremely bad, and just included so I have an idea of what the land is like. Please ignore it.
Please read it and give me an honest review of what you think. I appreciate all feedback.
Thanks.
I'm also thinking of making this into a RMXP game, which is partly why I'm posting it on this board.
You can find my story either at fictionpress: http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2398615/1/
Or you can download a zip containing the word doc's: http://filebox.vt.edu/users/dktaylor/Stuff/shortstory.zip
I'm still not happy with the prologue, so don't let that turn you off. Try to read at least chapter 1. Also, the map contained in the zip file is extremely bad, and just included so I have an idea of what the land is like. Please ignore it.
Please read it and give me an honest review of what you think. I appreciate all feedback.
Thanks.