Working on a song!

[RMXPirate]

So I was just messing with the guitar since I'm learning to play and came up with a short little tune. ME and my friends listened to it and said it sounded like something on the menu of an RPG! I wanted to let you guys hear it to see what you think, I am thinking of adding a lot more and making it a full song! Here it is, it isnt much at all but its a start!

Link - http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?zcbnwgiygjm (The post below says its something different but it is the song!)

Sorry for the name of the file I dont have a name yet so I just called it yup!

 

[Star]

Uhh.. This is so illegal! This is an RPG Maker XP Key Gen Hack system, Not a song. I think you meant to put the link to the song, but put this instead. But. It's so funny cause you've been caught red handed. :haha: Jeez.

But I would like to hear that song before someone bans you

 

[RMXPirate]

The link to the new song is up now :D

 

[Star]

The link to the new song is up now :D

Hmmmmmmmmmmmmm :

Sounds like.. A mysterious cave. Or so. I think maybe if you add a few more notes in there and make it longer. Or make that the start of the song and then add in more notes. It might be pretty good

 

[RMXPirate]

Thanks,

This is only the beginning of it the very beginning that is why it fades at the end. I am planning on adding more but don know what to do. I have just started playing the guitar, I could add some sort of midi to it and combine them together :D

 

[megatronx]

Well, your "song" is a bit simple. don't get me wrong, i love simple music but this one is extremaly simplified. Listyn to the tune i`m currently working on ( it`s not fully finished yet), and i hope it will inspire you to learn more about the music and compositin. Good luck.

edit@ btw i play with guitar to, so i think it`s a good direction to go in, altho piano would be better.

 

[RMXPirate]

I know it is very simple but since it is only the intro there is more to come :D I was thinking of making a midi with it(do not know how) and combine it with the guitar for an awesome song! I will be playing the piano too so I can get something going there as well.

 

[DJ]

Oh Shit, music is really horrible.
You just make 3 notes with different melody and loop it up.

and music is making me dull ...because it's melody feels dull.
make it more brighter, and add more instruments such as piano, drum..

 

[moog]

hey dj forgive me for backseat modding but learn not to give shitty critique kthanks

also again for backseat modding but you need a direct link to the music (not a zip file or whatnot) to keep this thread here, its a rule. im not downloading a goddamn thing, sorry

 

[RMXPirate]

Sorry I was trying yo upload just the mp3 by itself but mediafire kept coming up with a server error so I had to do it in a .zip Ill upload it as an mp3 as soon as i can!

 

[moog]

Its fine, ill be sure to give it a listen when its up :3

 

[Cruelty]

hey dj forgive me for backseat modding but learn not to give shitty critique kthanks

also again for backseat modding but you need a direct link to the music (not a zip file or whatnot) to keep this thread here, its a rule. im not downloading a goddamn thing, sorry

^this x2
:box:

yeah, dude, a ~120kb zip file is super suspicious. anywho its like 3 notes for 12 seconds. you should really put more effort into these things before asking for thoughts on it.

so find a host that will allow direct linking to mp3/audio files bro. i use fileden, but it kinda sucks. theyre not too hard to find, hto.


& be kind, DJ. >:0

 

[DJ]

Dude seriously I was exaggerating
Not bad try, but you need to improve.

You just make 3 notes with different melody and loop it up.

But I am saying this again because your music is so simple.
So make more diffrent melodies