WIP-White haired teen

[Marzat]

This is my first try at doing a sprite for RPG Maker. Its still being devolped but I'm just goung to show you what I've done so far.

Updated 7/21/07 I did the tuorial which said darker colors at the bottom and and lighter colors from light source. Hope I did better shading.

Updated 3/16/08 Decided to continue it

 

[Isopaha]

This is my first try at doing a sprite for RPG Maker. Its still being devolped but I'm just goung to show you what I've done so far.

http://i67.photobucket.com/albums/h306/Marzat/jimmy.png[/IMG]

I think there is no shading.. Add it :D

 

[EJlol]

It needs more contrast. It also have some pillow shading which is bad.

 

[~R~]

it's pillow shaded, too saturated and needs more colors
that's the first teen i see wearing a jumpsuit like this one

 

[WalkingAbomination]

Maybe he's from the future , yeah man you need to add some lighting to his hair, clothes and add some detail to the hair, you know hair strands and stuff like that, keep at it bud.

 

[Marzat]

Updated

 

[~R~]

very better, but the hair needs an outline and less "square" shape...

see some samples in 001-figther01 and try this tutorial:
http://shaffyness.ymvdesigns.com/hair.html

 

[Marzat]

updated

 

[ciela]

I edited it a bit

http://img47.imageshack.us/img47/5562/efoe0.png[/IMG]

 

[Marzat]

Decided to continue it and to remake all my old things so Hogwarts Male Students is next