[WIP]My First Ever Sprite(HK)

[Totti]

Hey guys, this is my first ever sprite. I'd though I'd post it up here so you guys can tell me what to improve.

Spoiler: V1

http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/6726/wipfemale3kv2.png[/IMG]

Spoiler: V2

http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/7855/wipfemale3bi4.png[/IMG]

Spoiler: V3

http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/7058/wipfemale3ft3.png[/IMG]

C&Cs

Thanks in advanced.

 

[Lexy]

Nice work Totti i hope to see the complete set soon

 

[Totti]

OK, I did a couple things as you said, Graxiplon, so there's V2.

 

[Artia]

wow another italian... ciao totti....

i don't like it very much, expecially hair.... shade them more

 

[Totti]

Ciao, Artia, I'm a bit lost on where to shade ATM, and is it just the color of the hair that you don't like?

Edit: I reshaded, how about now?

 

[Lexy]

It looks alot better Totti now you need to do the whole sheet if you do another edit maybe loosen up her clothes a tad

 

[Totti]

maybe she likes her clothes tight, yea actually it was just easier to make tight clothes to start off with

 

[Showkaizer]

I think the third version is a great improvement, but you may want to do more than just shade the template. Like maybe add some outlines where the clothes separate (the waist, and the ankles mostly. Also I think it would help allot if you lightened both the lightest shade of your green and blue.

the hair is decent but it too lacks any real outline. And the contrast needs work. From the palette I can see you used allot of colors, but they don't change too much in luminosity. So it looks a little flat even with the shading. Looks good so far though, keep it up! =)

 

[Totti]

Thanks, Kaizer, how would I go about changing Luminosity?

 

[Showkaizer]

It's just fancy talk for "making it brighter" Just choose a lighter color, but not too much lighter or you'll ruin it. you may feel the need to lighten the shadows as well, which is fine. I didn't mention this before , but try to desaturate that blue a bit. Its too "blue" to be jeans ,