[WIP] Music using FL Studio 7 XXL

[Chaos_Prime]

I've been working on FL Studio 7 XXL to try to regain my music composer, so post what you like or dislike about it and I'll change it seeing that it's still wip.
Oh and as a side note I've no clue how to stop the whoosh within the song.
http://rapidshare.com/files/20065605/Battle-03.mp3
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I still don't know how to compact the link into a single word or phrase.

 

[Chaos_Prime]

bump~yes it has been more than three days~
I'm wanderin what am i doing wrong to make people skip my topics?

 

[Murcu]

I just gave it a listen. I think it needs some work. It's kind of all over the place. The bit where you brought in ther background electric beat was pretty cool, but the bell sounding instrument doesn't seem to have any kind of point. Try to get a feeling in a song and stick with it.
Adn remember, patterns are a huge part of aesthetics.

Either that, or it just isn't my cup of tea.

 

[Fallofthetyrant]

Ok Chaos, it's good, but use panning, more panning, but don't pan the bass or kick drums, leave those in the center, and put those pads lightly towards left or right, and then the same for the main instruments.
Also it lacks of equalizing, a bit of reverb. and in overall, you need more variation of melody. Don't use the same melody again and again. if you need help feel free to contact me.
See ya'

 

[Chaos_Prime]

I'll work on it in the morning, spent all night last night trying to figure out why I'm getting that whooshing sound. So I'll also add another piece I've been working on.